need to improve hem. Voted: hemen112 / The doom
Posted on: 2010-11-08 11:18:46

A-thom it's now i have been serious about my lyrics about rap, you can't tell me to improve in such a short time (it will take me 6 months to 1 year to improve) and little by litte my lyrics get better every day, and half of lyrics i write is from my head before writing on this site, so they are freestyles. and i am 15 years old, i don't think your vote wasn't fair my lyrics at least 6 and Sp33chless lyrics ar at least 8. And i get better by time, my lyrcis will be in top in six months - 1 years. Remember everything takes time, i can't improve so much just in two weeks, my lyrics improve little by litte everyday i write them on school and here on this site. but either way thanks for your vote and comment! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-08 12:34:50

Hemen u got the potentials but u need to aim harder punches at ur opponent, read some hot battles to see how it goes N u will get better... keep it up k Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-09 00:21:17

doom got this one nice from both yall though Voted: hemen112 / The doom
Posted on: 2010-11-09 10:13:25

if your lookin at this old battle, i apologize. i shouldn't just laid it out like that. send me 8 man. better make it hot! Voted: hemen112 / The doom
Posted on: 2010-11-13 09:56:56