LAST LINE: CIRCUMSICION= 'Cut this Bitch Off' when I 'TAKE U OFF THE TOP!'............ Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 11:46:35

--hell ill get (checked) by his (mate) da way i PLAY dis PAWN--- his girl will check me out for playin him/ ill get a checkmate with a pawn aka a win with the weakest peice baby boi dont make me LAY u on ur LAWN--- the scene in the movie baby boy where he is caught in a drive by and is so shook he lays on his lawn thinkin he got shot till my eyes get PUFFED n if cirme is da devils PIE-IM takin a bite out of it like scruf MAGRUFF--- the PUFFED line was an analogy between the line in which biggie was referrenced,also when u smoke alot of good weed ur eyes get puffed up::::the scruff magruff line is in refence to the old masscot of detectives which was a dog who would take a bite out of crime, in this line crime is a metaphor for the devils pie da BEST need no VEST, when i pass thru ur street ill see u put ur jay low(j-lo) on da block den get shot till ur DRESS get open CHESTED--- j-low form the block was released around the time jennifer lopez started fuckin puff daddy, also around the time where see wore a dress that was open at the chest 2 the point everyone though her tits where gonna pop out n say wtf u lookin at uzi come in HANDY/ think i was on an award show da way i take out his GRAMMY/ --- grammy awards are givin to records that are great, n i take out his grandmother with da uzi Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:01:24

Someones Gifted!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:13:24

whats that homie ^^ Encore? lol ..Peace.. Keep it hunnid! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:16:09

guess we all should "WRITE A WRITTEN??!?!" lmao watev.. nice DROP swaggn fa sho.. props VBF FV Voted: NoBrAiNeR / DonAiRE
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:27:18

FV is in. Send 8 Voted: NoBrAiNeR / DonAiRE
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:27:26

hope u aint sayin my shyt was written Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:32:57

Gifted shit Swagg. I would say one thing, if you want characters between ya rhymes to clear it up a bit. I'd suggest using hyphons (-) instead of the wiggles (~). It looks a lot smoother and easier to read. Otherwise, keep up the fire bro. Peace; you Gifted! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 12:42:30

I understand fam.. when i put the squiglies..lol.. its when its pose to be said faster than normal.. but sure will do so on next ,cheif.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 13:07:56

yo, both were good, some stretched concepts between both. one read off a lot easier with more direct hits than the other. eZz -RhetoriK Voted: NoBrAiNeR / DonAiRE
Posted on: 2010-10-20 15:23:18

Gifted! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-20 16:42:18

if yall need 2 know the comment that is very long up top isnt another verse it just goes into depth on some of the lines explaining there connection 2 one another Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-10-21 10:13:34