aight dude coupla things, 1st off fill yo lines dont press enter after each bar coz you'll get less material in. 2ndly you gotta lotta work to do dude, you got sum V basic ideas but you gotta hit alot harder, also try fight in sum simple multies ie. break you - fake dude - take two - snake fool. G'luck tho mayn i aint gon snipe this one. Peace...3D Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-09-29 04:30:59

Bears is elevating quickly. I think the first verse was weakened by it's quantity and not much effort was put in, considering it was an opener. Bears, you need a tighten up on your multis n' you'd be golden. Fair one in. Vote back wit' fair ones. Voted: FiveFive / astro-e
Posted on: 2010-09-29 05:08:42

ahhaha kind fo took it easy just for the win :P check my 16, that shits hot Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-09-29 05:35:46

both weak but gotta give it to bears but your still a bitch Voted: FiveFive / astro-e
Posted on: 2010-09-29 07:27:05

yeah good elevation by bears, but alot more to go... one has like 3 bars submitted...lol and bears had like 3 punches...but heres tha fair from grizz. Voted: FiveFive / astro-e
Posted on: 2010-09-29 08:26:48

keeep hating im loving it fake things be ducking shit... ahhaha think about it-deepniss shit ;) Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-09-29 22:32:13