Nice duel fellas. Both had good moments. Felt one was more consistant. Champ vote. Posted on: 2010-08-15 12:01:27

Line-line expo ok. Geo---i pass my time with the fucking HOES N' LED, FAM! so once the voters "Read Your Bars" they started to DOSE THEN SAID: DAMN! that's boring... so we "Caught This 'Cal Prick" with a "FROZEN RED HAND!!"(Culprit)---I saw were you where heading with this line but it didn't really execute for me. Wordplay was iffy, Culprit/Cal Prick.. K and T don't have the same pronunciation.. Other than that a nice flow and multies intact, concept was good and punch was a "jab"...a 7...---dawg, you call yourself "Gangsta???" stop lieing! YOU'RE DEFINATLEY FRAIL! so when you're running your thinking of a SURE PENALTY... JAIL?? wrong! when you hear the "Siren's Song" it's in the "PERSEPHONE TALE!!!"--- Not a bad line. The thing that stood out to me here is the fact that i thought you put alot of thought into this line leading to a breach of the enjoying to read factor...Although, punch was weak...7...---i'm the type to "Get Bitches" and HIT YA DULL WIGGERS! but you like "G, Sis?" ok! i'll go GET DA FULL TRIGGERS cuz if you put your "John To Them Ladies" it's gotta be "BIBLICAL SCRIPTURES!!"(John 2:10, Ladies)---Wiggers? really?? Nah man. Could've put some more thought into this which woulda led to better execution and a harder punch cos the concept was there, again. Saying that, wordplay, off again. Them? ten? nup, zip, nudda...6...---just a SET OF REALLY WACK SPITTERS! and you're talking "Wins?" BET YA KILL THE PACK WIT YOUR'S? nooo! they wouldn't say: "Ethical Won" with "NECROPHILIAC JITTERS!!"(Eff A Cold One)--- Imo this was your strongest line. I guess this was your best wordplay, but still not promising. Punch was there, concept was there...8...Overall, attempted wordplay which was good. Concepts were what lifted your rating. Punches meh. Keep elevating. Eth---He "comes up short" like I FRACTURES HIS KNEES so he's "eaten quicker" than an AFRICAN FEAST and now getting TRAPPED INBETWEEN the BACK OF MY TEETH where the CAVITIES BE!---HAAAAAA, excellent start flow was nice concept/punch was existant, executed nicely. Solid stuff...9...---You don't KNOW "JACK ON THE TREES" but says he GROWS FABULOUS WEED, so I asked; 'How you PLANTING THE SEEDS?', he replied 'Seeds? NO....MAGICAL BEANS!---Even though you used the same scheme throughout i'ma break it down to the concepts anyway. Um, this line was more of a story telling line. I think it was more of a comical factor here than dissing your opponent, but this line was again nicely executed...7 (high)...---Earned in a trade for my ANIMAL'S BEEF'! You don't HANDLE THE STEEL or shoot-clowns, hell, he "couldn't put his foot-down" like LOW GRAVITY FIELDS!---Felt the concept here. Punch was good. Not much i can say.---Latley, your RAPPING IS WEAK so we're "less alike" than the boondock-kids as "you lack the motivation to produce-hot-shit" like you're LACKING THE SPEECH of a MANAGING TEAM!---Got the concept here but i didn't really like the line myself. Bland. boring. I wanted more. It was good, but maybe a bit more thought to this would've been a much more better outcome.---Couldn't put me in a "BAG ON THE STREETS" unless it's PRADA THAT'S SEEN CARRIED BY G! You "wouldn't see rock" on SAND AT THE BEACH and couldn't have the "flyest material" TRAVELING EAST with ALLADIN AND PEEPS!---Best line from you, Eth. Really felt the punch and concept and where you were heading. It was nicely constructed, really a line to outline and for kids to watch out for...9...Overall, nicely executed verse. The concepts matched which its hard to do for some people, especially the bag on the streets line.. Sooo yeh, soz if its a bit meh the expo. Vote goes to the harder punches. E z , H T Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-14 22:01:10

Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-14 22:01:36

BATTLE GETTIN DUM SLEPT ON... WINNER HAD A MIRAGE OF CONCEPT PUNCHES THAT HIT HARD. LOSER HAD NICE PUNCHES BUT THEY WASNT AS EFFECTIVE..... ILL ASS EXPO HEAVY Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-14 22:05:56

SV! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-14 22:15:51

hah. Good stuff from both Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-14 22:38:58

G.O.D., good verse, homie... some of the punches were nice, conceptually, but didn't connect well.. however, the wordplay was a lil sketchy, i still believe it was pretty dope.. especially the closer, that was nice, overall, good, creative (ish) verse but the punches need to hit harder.. make them more directed and harsh lmao, (like your closer).. ETH, almost the same deal, nice, creative and fresh concepts in the lines but lackin the connection, even tho most of your lines connected just with a little below hard approach.. however, i felt your verse was rich with flow and swag, the style and structure of your verse makes it easier to follow and adds to your punches.. good battle, both keep it up.. Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-14 23:15:26

close battle but one had better punches for me. no h8 fvb Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-14 23:57:21

Yeah I get what you guys are saying with a few of the punches. I was trying to work with my multie to punch game, so I wrote all of this to the one multie and tried my best to get the punches flowing from it. Thanks for the feedback guys. Good battle Geo D. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-15 09:07:49

sorry man crazy concept you got the ten kid Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-15 13:24:55

Fair in respect it Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-15 15:55:23

fv no hate, vote back Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-16 02:41:30

Some shady wordplay was a downfall for one person here, took allllot away from his verse...Other battler had some pretty sick flow going on with some niice punches...Fairness is dropped...Respect it Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-16 07:30:43

fv in Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-16 22:59:29

gb fv Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-17 09:19:00

sick bars geo Voted: -Sir / Chester Waterman
Posted on: 2010-08-17 09:50:10