EtH... Opener was dope hahaha! Liked the "Classick" build to the Head Lice punch! Rest was ok the closer was a lil flat to me. Soup... Opener has potential but execution was off. The gramz/gramma type concept is played to me. But the next set, the Jammer Dodger punch was sickkk! The "Ship shape/bottle) should of been made into a main punch. Closer was decent too. Overall... I really dont know. EtH had that big opener, but didnt really get back to that level again. Soup was more consistant over the 8... I dunno. Best punch Vs Best punches.... hmm.. I guess one was a bit more fresh and creative here. Im not just saying this, but this was seriously the closest battle ive voted on for a while. Posted on: 2010-08-12 13:58:26

Wordplay: (3) Erb / Herb, Herb from Two And A Half Men's hobby is playing with toy trains on train tracks. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-10 12:46:58

Good battle Eth. Respect homie Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-11 20:12:44

typo: Coz we all know the only time they "Seen Crack" is in a HOSPITAL GOWN!!! ment to say only tim HE .. lol :z Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-11 20:24:55

EtH checks my battles from time to time so its only right i check his material, #5 :D...haha...Anywhooo ooooo...Eth: Thought your opener was sick, the grandmother concept, niice...Head lice line was nice, didnt think it hit as hard as it could have, but still good...liked the name play with the two and a half men concept...Wasn't really feeling your closer, idea was somewhat decent but felt it was missing better execution...Overall i liked your verse, thought you started off well but ended on a weak note...SoupErb: Wasnt feeling the opener, felt it was . . . bland, no hate by my comment but i feel it was basic from what i've seen you jot down before...the fam'ly & jammie dodger lines were good, improvement from your opener...bottled it line was cool too...build up to your closing punch was aslo ill...Overall i also liked your verse, those little jabs between the big punches really helped the enjoyment factor of your verse...Close battle to call, keeping it concealed...fairness is dropped...Respect it... Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-11 20:36:50

damn eth, you killed with the opener, good looks on the expo for two and a half men, made the battle nice and the closer was fire too, this is sooo much better than anything else I read by you, its fucking hott............holy fuck fuck, souperbs opener fucked my mind as well, the closer was another mind melter....these both had good flow, but had to give it to who had more :ohhhhhhhh: punches it was 4 to 2 for me (not necessarily in that order)...this battle is fucking fire, needs to hotlist Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-11 20:42:23

damn hot battle, one started hot then kinda stayed on point, one started ok but gathered steam all thru they verse i respect n fux wit both cats so i just enjoyed this, good work by both Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-12 04:59:09

wow Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-12 15:57:42

Faggit ^ Give an expo. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-12 16:05:35

Eth- hote opener, good way to set the tone from the jump. head lice line was pretty nice too. flow was nice throughout. good job. Soup-angry robber line was pretty nice, i've seen it used in different ways. u made it original. the closer made me lol. good duel here fellas. the fair is in. one had the slighly better verse with a batter opener and less filler. Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-12 16:45:10

Dope battle man. Good to see some people actually voting on some stuff. Good luck dude. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-12 17:06:54

cbav Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-12 17:07:56

soup Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-12 18:16:45

^Dope I was hoping we would get some no namers voting. Leave expos people/ Both me and soup want the feedback. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-12 18:38:29

awesome Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-12 20:41:14

Eth, you suck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-13 05:31:33

^Thanks Rain Matrix's bitch. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-13 08:40:17

no h8 FV Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 10:13:49

EtH, i think its nothin less of a surprise for me to tell you that your opener was sick as fuck!! the concept and execution was nearly perfect.. the rest seem to fall from that, but still remained pretty hot.. the head lice line was nice, but the concept seems basic, yet still fresh.. so good line.. the 2 and half men line was decent, execution was aight, and the effectiveness was okay, the closer was meh, as well.. not much of an effective punch and the concept didn't seem complex.. sort of like a creative filler, not a closer.. but it was still good.. Soup, dope verse, i don't know where you get the idea of the drug-play on EtH since they weren't mentioned in his verse once, but the concepts were still dope.. the opener was nice, flowed well and the structure was creative.. it hit hard and was a decent meta.. the family prob's concept was nice... the next line was creative but not very effective as well as the line after.. was cool and flowed nice but didn't hit as hard as your previous lines, even tho the whole "killing" concept was freshly executed.. the closer was nice as well, idk where you get the point to flip on him with 'Rocks by the Lb" since he didn't mention anything about it, but the concept still made a pretty nice closer.. overall, EtH was more direct and on point.. good punches and complexity.. only problem i might have noticed was that some punches were basic altho fresh, they didn't seem very effective, you still flowed nicely tho, consistency could get better.. Soup, the structure, style, flow of your verse was outstandin in my opinion but your disses weren't very directed..the only crack reference in eth's verse didn't involve him havin any.. however your concepts were good set aside that, and you seemed to have a majority of effective punches, seen crack concept was funny and nice 'n the line not involvin drug-play were pretty sick.. Close battle.. Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 10:36:27

Thanks for the expo Stoy, much appreciated Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-13 10:40:07

good battle, both have they own distinct style which was effective for both cats.. close, voted Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 12:03:45

Damn eth yo shit was hot cuzz and erb yo shit was hot to dis shit was fo real hard to pick Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 12:54:16

Yea I Rarely vote anymore but fuckit .... EtH, that opener was good money, the actual punch was sick I jus wish the wind up was better .... Head Lice Punch was solid and clever ... Jus focus on the flow in ur set-ups & ur punches will hit harder, im feelin da concepts ..... I Dont watch Two and a Half Men but I grasp what u were tryna do here and for those who kno te show, it seems effective .... The Closer cuda been better ... Didnt think it was along the same lines of the opener ..... Overall Solid verse ....Souperb, The opener was Fly even tho I'd say the actual concept cuda of been fresher .... Fam'ly Problems punch was hott becuz of the way u said it .. made it solid .... ur next few bars here a felt lacked that wow factor .... U definately wanna keep ya verse consistent and along the same lines as ur opener where u set ur standard .... The Closer way actually decent ... only thing that takes away from it is that its somewhat predictable ..... U also had on overall solid verse .... To The both of yall hats off .... I wanna see yall both try to focus more on that Wow factor and originality thats gonna force your lyrics to significantly stand out more .... Set Ups and delivery are as crucial as the actual punchline itself too ... This is a very close battle but as far as the vote, im gonna roll wth the one I felt ad more effective hits ... I do feel one had a better Punch out of the two verses but the other had a better number of hits to me .... High 8s round off to 9s .... Fair Vote has been Dropped ... Keep Elevatin Yall .... Real Talk, 1. Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 12:55:13

Really appretiate the votes above. That's why I gave battling one last shot, to hope you guys check my stuff and give feedback like that. Appretiate it guys. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-13 13:38:01

aight...Eth..that opener was probably one of the iller lines i've read from you, homie...the followup was decent, but the structure and wording threw it off a little bit...i actually felt like every punch was somewhat consistently strong, but they were sparse, i felt like you needed about two or three more jabs and maybe one more punch to make the verse reach that next level. SOUP: lol...this was a consistently dope verse..it wasnt conceptually on the same level at all times, but it there were more punches thrown in the verse. This one is a tuff call because one was heavier, but the other had more going on....dont excpect swaying from Killz...good shit yall...deuces Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 14:11:09

fv in Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 14:46:18

fv no h8..i need credits Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 14:48:59

THIS WOZ A NICE AS FUCK BATTLE.....LETSBEEFS MA GRANDMOTHER LMFAO THAT MADE ME 'LOL' FOR SOME REASON haha....BEST PART OF ETHS VERSE WOZ THA TWO AN A HALF MEN LINE, VERY NICELY THOUGHT UP.....SOUPS RHYMIN SCHEMES WERE VERY IMPRESSIVE AN MA FAV LINE WOZ THA JAMMY DODGER PUNCH, PERFECT BUILD UP AN A HARD HIT......OVERALL ONE WOZ MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT AN THAT REALLY MADE THA VERSE STAND OUT MORE THAN THA OTHER.......GREAT SHIT THO GUYS PROPS....FAIREST VOTE IS IN....NOW GO CHECK MA CYPHER!!!!!!hahaha.. ...PEACE AN GL TO BOTH Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-13 16:30:41

hot ass motha fuckin battle...wordplay was on point as well as the rhyming schemes....cb fv in all i think soup got the tiny edge Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-14 08:30:07

Fair is in, Gb Vb Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-14 12:31:01

20 votes, looks like complaining in the forums did me some awesome justice eh? Dope battle man. Looks to end soon... Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-14 13:43:09

shit was close yo, the soup line from eth was heavyweight form, shit was crack.. the head lice line was wack, and played, you know that, the two and a half men concept was cool, could have been executed better, the closer was ok. soup- you had a nice flow and cool swag throughout, there really werent any quotables tho, the robber line was cool, the closer was cool to.. focused mainly on flow. votes in, respect it. Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-14 14:57:35

forgot about that family problems line, shit.. oh well. shit was nice tho. Voted: Chester Waterman / 1DollarShort
Posted on: 2010-08-14 15:00:39

Sick battle man. Good shit. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-08-14 20:31:21