All Respect, No H8.. GB Fella! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-07-19 10:37:10

Concealed. A. Your verse was reeeaaal solid man! Good multies and great setups, and the concepts were nice. I enjoyed your read. I especially liked that fresh prince line. Hot! B. Your verse was funny bro lol that bunions line? Hahahaa! Forreal though man you might wanna ask a vet or an experienced texter how to structure, because yours needs a little work. Just sayin that most voters will look at your verse and automatically write it off because it looks "newbish". Learn the capping technique, or a technique that sets punches apart from setups and setups apart from filler and learn how use symbols to distinguish diff parts of your verse/lines. Do that? And I GARUNTEE you'll have better results in battle. Good battle guys. Voted: WaR DrIvEn / millionfaces
Posted on: 2010-07-19 18:54:45

One was pretty complex wit some bars and had good hits, other wasnt bad, just didnt really hit much. Its fair :high: Voted: WaR DrIvEn / millionfaces
Posted on: 2010-07-20 19:23:04

Killa: the "mf doom" was a nice concept but worded off.. liked the 'jake tucker' line was dope... the Prince n wayne lines were nice as fuck also..plus the added nameplay was cool.. the closer was nice to.. had a good flow and the multi's were pretty good throughout it!!!.. Million: flow and vocab was very nice throughout.. the 'bunion' n 'couldnt tel the difference beween his ashole and his elbow' lines were my fav.. it lacked a bit of set up and creativity tho.. the connections from set up to punch wasn't there to make the punches hit harder and clean.. very nice verse tho.. you got alotta potential.. stay up the both of you!! dope battle Voted: WaR DrIvEn / millionfaces
Posted on: 2010-07-20 19:30:51