FV VB. Posted on: 2010-06-01 12:51:48

Hahaha j/k! Aiight lemme break this down... faggits... Posted on: 2010-06-01 12:52:09

***Goez In*** Ok first reading of the verse suprised me. I used to remember thinking that your strenght was multis and flow, but you seemed to use a completely different style here. A more ReeFer, Mahvulus type style and im not sure it suit you that well. First thoughts were that the wording wasnt great and the concepts werent as fleshed out as they shoulda been. Positives i saw were that some concepts were really nice here, its not easy to have fresh stuff against someone who has had as many battles as Krhyme but you had some here. Ok now ima re-read one punch/section at a time and break it down. - he's SHOOKEN W/ SURE & EASE.."If Krhyme Goin In?" what a ChessNut (morris) like ROOKS & THE HORSES! PLEASE! I coulda "Opened-First" & he still wouldn't "Respond-Right" like CROOKED AUTHORITIES!!!! ey Krhyme?? (Ko!) - The punch was really great, clever and a great concept. The build imo was horrible. It just felt forced as hell, had no relevence to the punch and felt lik eyou were just trynna be swaggy for the sake of it with actual little in the way of content. - Like this "Misdemeanor" he's 'MINIMAL PRESSURE'. "speaking verbally" I'm never "Filled-w/-Flaws(flo ss)" I don't need DENTAL INSPECTORS! .& "Moving-Out"? how 'Krhyme' only "Goez-In" on "Two Accounts"? in Judges Dimensions ~n~ CRIMINAL RECORDS!!! (damn!) - Ok, better here. The "Floss" into the "Dental" minipunch was nice. The main punchline was a good concept, wording coulda been better though. - I'm sick of his MALCONTENT..STOP!! lyrically Sounds-The-Best?-Not even "Seriously" is this "CLOWN-a-THREAT" HA! so why even SPEAK LINES THAT MORGUES CLAIM? if it "Kills Me" to say "G.I. IS BEFORE K" I'm not only speakin' of the ALPHABET OCK! - This concept so waaaaaaaaay too played fam! Seriously the weakness of the concept just makes the punch worthless from the off. Wording was off and unnatural and was just a flat punch overall. - See the 'Flow's-Methodine', & since Krhyme's Killed its his GHOST NEXT TO DIE, text continuously "Causing-Neck-Crooks "//_how the only time he "HOLDS TECHS TO SKIES" is when he's "TOSSING-NETBOOKS"?! ? 'So-Please-Save-Ya-R aps' its GAUZE & FLESH HOOKS when i "Go-In-on-Krhyme" like POLICE RAIDS & TRAPS!! - The punch was a nice concept, coulda been better executed tho. The build was a lil choppy and a lil meh except the "netbook" which was nice. - He wants INSTEAD OF A VICTIM? speaking of a RESPECT FOR HIS WISDOM? I'll Inspect-Him-w/-Riche s(Hoodrich...Nah!) how I'll "Pick Tommy's ^p" like "ANGELICA'S WISHES!! & comparing Krhyme?...ehh its "J.J.-w/-More-Sleek- Lines"(comedian) b/cuz the only time "Rules See" "K.K.-BEFORE-G.I.'s" is DISLEXIA SYMPTOMS!!! (Ko!!) - Again the played concept really hurt this punch. Dislexia lines are done all the time and had no WOW factor at all. The "Angelicas Wishes" build was nice though. - ***** Overall: Honestly i am really suprised here. Its like you've lost your identity and are just trynna be a ReeFer clone, which isnt a easy style to mimic for the best battlers. The punches had no relevence in the builds, concepts were mostly played as fuck. Flow was choppy and.... this just isnt you. You are MUCH FUCKIN better than this. MUCH better. I think you really need to reconsider your style of writing or just spend a lil longer writing the verse maybe. Because there was a lotta flaws here fam. Thats no hate cuz u my dude too. But yeah i was really shocked at this drop. Posted on: 2010-06-01 13:35:29

***Krhyme Killz*** Ok first read through and the the flow was really great here, simple but effective and wording was good too. The concepts were great, especially the first half of the verse, felt like you fell off conceptually in the second half but still maintained solid punches. Ok likes break this down... - yes...GUESS HE KNOWS THA ALPHABET, but he wouldn't be able to 'face certain flyness' if he PRESS HIS NOSE TO NASA JETS, thats why i QUESTION THOSE WITH BRASHEST JESTS in lines thats STRETCHES, SO IT MASK EFFECT...so saying that you ever came before Krhyme is preTENTIOUS (HEAR EM LAUGHIN YET??) lol.../ - Flipping advantage was used well, touched on the played concept from one of his punches. "Nasa Jets" was nice, the final punch coulda been a bigger hit but was still a nice jab. - i'm a REBEL, NIGGA....with CLEVER SCRIBBLES, you just 'a tick/attic' that was 'first floored' by my opener...see our 'LEVELS' DIFFER!!!/ - Could be the best punch of the battle. Concept was maintained in the build well, good flow and wording, just a great example of a great punchline. - but if we BUILDING HOMES UP? i'll PEEL N ROLL DUTCH, til i'm FEELING SO TUFF that when i get to smackin, i'll even let 'you get an extra whip in the back' like STEALING TOW TRUCKS!!(really sho nuff!)... - Nice bar here, flow and concept was nice. And the rhyme scheme continues for this... - !)...i ball bitch 'he gets cabs/he gets scabs'...like when HEALING SHOWS UP...he's hit 'rock bottom' and the CELING'S STONE, CUZ!!...so if shots 'missed yer peanut/mister peanut'...this time i'll really KILL AND GO 'NUTS'!!!/ - Another real solid hit here. Not a massive punch but a nice concept built up nicely. Solid. - shit, if its 'foul i shoot at least once'...LIKE A FREE THROW, people seen we battling, and they knew K would LIKELY BEAST, THOUGH..and RIGHTFULLY SO...and yes he's poor...shit his 'thoughts always on paper' like a DIARY, YO...lol...so if you NICE N STREET, HO?...TRY TA EAT, BRO...look at them beat up kicks...this fucka couldnt even RIDE A BEAT HOME!!(he's fin-a-ly owned!)/ - The flow was nice but i wasnt really feeling this one too much. fairly solid but nothing fresh really, multis were a bit too simple for me. The punch was nice, but the overall bar fell a lil flat to me. - acting like his SQUAD IS SO SICK? its not a PROBLEM THOUGH IF you know you GOTTA OMIT tha fact you GOBBLE MO DICK and 'go down on pipes' more than MARIO, BITCH!!!(god he's so sick)/ - Build coulda been better and more connected, the punch was also a lil played conceptually but still remained a solid hit. - the problem is your words are TASTELESS, BORIN...plus you know he's the FAKEST WHORE WHEN he front like the BRAVEST, SURE MAN...we all know you just a 'funny style nigga'...Mike Epps and TRACY MORGAN!!!...you dont wanna battle Krhyme Killz, you wanna TASTE HIS ORGAN - Dewcent closer, again nothing really WOW but solid here. Build coulda been better, and the punch was just ok to me. - ***** Overall: A verse of two halves. The first half was really dope concepts were tight and overall quality was real high. Fell off a lil second half but still at a level good enough to see off most people. I think you mighta been able to fit in another punch instead of some of the more filler build ups to some of them. I think what happened is you relised that your first half was tight enough that you could afford to let the gas off a little bit. Nice verse overall though. Posted on: 2010-06-01 13:35:56

***The Vote*** Ok so i think my breakdown tell you's roughly how this is going. Goez i think you really hurt yourself with your style choice. And sacrificed alot of the basics in the pursuit of swagga. Krhyme you had the first half which was a mid-high nine to me, and the second half which was mid eight. One was really off-form as a result of style problems, the other did what they had to do to get the win. I got Goez's verse rated as a high 7, that sounds a lil harsh but i honestly felt even though cosmetically the verse looked nice the only good concepts were badly set up and the rest were just very played punches. Krhyme... hmm im inbetween a high 8 and a low 9... ima go with the latter because the first half was soo good. This is no hate, no bias here. Hope my vote is helpful to both of y'all. The voting? Its CLASSICKKKKK!!! Posted on: 2010-06-01 13:36:19

krhyme on the vote...u kno its fair Voted: NAWKOUT_ARTISTT / Krhyme Killz
Posted on: 2010-06-01 13:52:34

Swift, you aren't allowed to vote lol, Krhyme, good battle man. & RULE, I'm tryna elevate my style, so I'm battling vets w/ it right out the gate. If I switched it up on newbs or 2nd raters then I wouldn't get GOOD ADVICE like you gave here. Prime EX = You lol. Respect the vote, no animosity @ all famz. I just need to practice @ an elevated style. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-06-01 19:18:27

*Cracks Fingers* Alright Here's Why I Was The FVC President. Lol One Sec. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-06-01 22:07:28

FUCKIN INSANE BATTLE!!!!!!! REALLY LIKED SOE OF THA SHIT BOTH Y'ALL COOKED UP......I THINK OVERALL ONE USED THEIR CONCEPTS TO BETTER EFFECT AN DEFINATELY CAME HARDER WIT THA PUNCHES WIT MORE CONSISTANCY.....REAL LY LIKED THA MULTI USE AN SWAGGER OF ONE BUT OVERALL MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES TAKE IT FOR ME EVERYTIME, ONE LINE TOOK THIS FOR ME STRAIGHT AWAY.....GREAT FUCKIN READ THO GL TO BOTH......FAIREST VOTE IS IN....HOLLABACK! Voted: NAWKOUT_ARTISTT / Krhyme Killz
Posted on: 2010-06-02 19:24:40