Why am I blocked??? Hate mc's that block other good mc's! hate that shit man! But it's all good I'll stay off your battles!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-09 20:11:56

I Didn't block you...i don't even know how to Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-09 20:47:29

haha ummm Sir u def left more of box open then Sekurity, ur punchlines were weak as shit and half of ur shit doesnt even flow.....thats just my opinion ofcourse Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-09 22:43:45

Sekurity, you have potential. HELLA potential. I could follow your flow nicely, and everything was easy to read/relate to. Now....I'll be honest w/ you. Most people on LB won't even read your verse & automatically vote for SIR because of two things. ONE, he's ranked & you aren't. & TWO, your verse isn't structured. Notice how SIR caps the words that rhyme in his verse. A good line from you was "I could have written nothing and counted the votes for you----none/ Father sir/ Don't bother her/ Your more of man's man/". But since no words were capped or seperated w/ " marks, it is hard to pick out those kinds of lines. If there was a sea of broken glass and one crystal in the middle of the pile, it would be hard to see right? So from now on, w/ the words that rhyme, make sure you cap them or give them a distinguishing symbol. For example, "i'll let a razor off to graze his gapes & flaws, so his record wont be the only thing taking a major loss". This^ looks much different than, "I'll let a RAZOR OFF, to graze his GAPES-&-FLAWS/_so his "record" won't be the only thing taking a MAJOR LOSS". Get the picture? Every rhyming word or part of a punch should stand out. SIR, be careful when you snipe. B/cuz if you look @ structure & assume his verse is wack, you could get caught slippin, which is what happened here. You shouldn't have asked me to vote on this lol. I don't look @ structure ONLY, I look @ vocab, delivery, and concepts. Your concepts? were a bit unclear. I got the impression by reading that since you structured nicely you would get the W. Next time you snipe, make sure you use a sniper rifle, not a pistol man. I know how you rap & you're much MUCH better than this. Honestly, you got cought slipping. As simple as that. My vote is concealed, fair, and explained. Both keep elevating, especially you Sekurity. I look forward to seeing some battles in the future. SIR, keep killing the circuit man. Kulture Voted: sekurity76 / _SIR_
Posted on: 2010-05-10 21:02:14

fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-12 08:44:06

SIR you gotta fill in the gaps otherwise u mite of had more votes.. fv vb Voted: sekurity76 / _SIR_
Posted on: 2010-05-12 11:47:47

decent battle.sekurity76 you got potential.keep doin ya work and cap your punchlines next time.SIR got this with nice elements and flow even he didnt fill his whole box...fair vote is in...no hate..always keepin it real. Voted: sekurity76 / _SIR_
Posted on: 2010-05-12 20:08:26