HVK said it all. FVC VP. Posted on: 2010-04-25 12:32:18

NAB HAS POTENTIAL JUS NEED TO EXPAND YA VERSE A LIL BIT AN STRUCTURE IT OUT NICER.....POTENTIAL THO......BUT IN TERMS OF A BATTLE JWALL GOT THIS EZ, HIS VERSE HAD MORE CREATIVITY, MORE PUNCHES METAS AN ALMOST EVERYTHIN ELSE.....GOOD READ THO....FAIREST VOTE IS IN....HOLLABACK!.... peace Voted: Nab Lockout / JWall
Posted on: 2010-04-22 08:25:48

ive seen bettah outa santa clause but nab i dont know u but u really not that bad at all fam, u got sumthin goin for ya but need to work on fine tuning afta u drop ur verse go back an see if ur actually truly happy wit it cause u will always wanna change sumthin jus a lil tip famz no hate def solid from both yall Voted: Nab Lockout / JWall
Posted on: 2010-04-25 12:35:13

NAB LOCKOUT ok u had a cheezy opener, a tip in LB we tend to fill the box, ur flow was simple try more ov a smoover approach to ur flow by stretchin it a'lil'bit, u had good 1 syllable rhymes but that aint enuff ta win u a batttle against guys like JWALL so try usin double syllables with complexity, ur punches didnt hit as hard as you'd think you have but can be easily improved, concepts were good but try makin them more complex aswell, ur closer was basic...but remember all can be easily improved just learn from guys like ur opponent but dont bite, so you can just adept, nice attempt on usin nameplay, try heavier wordplay....Flow-5, Punches-4, Multies-1 and Concepts-4...overall a Mid-3.....criticizum s harsh but use it too improve and use it to ur advantage .................... .................... .....JWALL ok nice balanced opener, ur flow was nice and simple on this battle, ur punches flippin heavy but unnecessary coz it was a snipe, multies were nice and simple aswell, concepts were nicely laid out, closer just closed the deal for ya, no nameplay needed, nice wordplay.....Flow-8, Punches-9, Multies-8 and Concepts-8...overall l a High-8.............. ......extremely one sided but good learninn experience for one....FV dropped...return the fairs....my fair vote is how i see it....PEACE Voted: Nab Lockout / JWall
Posted on: 2010-04-25 12:45:07