Aiiiiiight lets break this one down! -------------------- --------------- EtH: Ok the opener - You the king? It’s treason, HAVE THEM SEND THE CALL and if your discussing gays; have you forGOTTEN THIS NERDS CERTAIN? I mean when he says ‘he has men BACKED AGAINST THE WALL’…he was TALKING IN THIRD PERSON - The actually punch/concept was a really dope one. The build was hella forced though and irrelevant. Flow was a lil stretched too. Third person concept was hella nice tho. Props - ……A self confessed VOYOUR WHO LOVES IT when it’s role playing like a LAWER IS PUNISHED but he doesen’t know who to watch…the BOY OR THE SLUT BITCH (Gaybo!) His punches, ALL HURTING AND COLD, so personal, WALL TOUCHING MY SOUL…pffft, only if I LOITER IN PUBLIC…… - Wasnt feeling this one to be honest. Flow was streched, build was basic and punch was flat to me. - JWall? Compulsive liar, as BAD AS THEY ARE! Example: he’s in a GANG AND THEY HARD who were a BAND AT THE START, BRANDED AS STARS who MASTERED GUITAR on the PLANET OF MARS and word on the street? His pleaSURES WRONG; he GETS TURNED ON by dick DASTARDLY’S CAR! But his friends? They’re NOT FAKE YAWLL (Honoust!), and they always GON’ ‘AYE, WALL!’ or at least according to him…when ASKED WHERE THEY ARE (Gone awol)! - Long rhyme scheme. Flow was excellent here. The closer concept was another really good one. Build and wording could of been better. Overall: A couple of excellent concepts let down by some sloppy build. Flow in the second half of the verse was much better. -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- ---- JWall: Aiight the opener - See HERES THE THING, You should FEAR THE KING and stop being a Two-Faced Bastard!! Hope your QUICK TA FIND ATTACKS cus UnEth your like a “FART always talkin SHIT BEHIND MY BACK!!.. - Flow was nice, but the concept and punch was waaay to basic for someone like you. - I didn’t respond to your WACK ISH cus FAG BITCH I didn’t want to Embarrass ya BEST BARS, cus see this “DUMMY” must be FUNNY cus he’ll just “Crash into the Wall” like TEST CARS!!.. - A real nice concept, hurt by the basic syllie count and lack of complexity here. Coulda been real dope. - Your verse? You shoulda CHUCKED IT cus to beat me you’ll need more then LUCK! SHIT I don’t know whats more “Forced” your Multies or the Girls you’ve FUCKED WIT!!.. - Honestly this is a huge departure from the standard of stuff ive read from you before. The multis are simple and conceptually just way too basic. - See there is no OTHER, SUCKER! My “Rushed Hour” Bars will “Jackie Chan” Karate Kick like that BROTHER TUCKER then leave ya thinking Wall’s like a “Male Porn Star at a Milf Orgy”, He’s a Cocky MOTHER FUCKER!!.. - More of the same. Decent flow but concept way too simple. - You just got the Fire Started, I BURNED YOU DOWN TO HELL, "Mr. Grammatically Correct" Hear let me B "Honoust!" n LEARNT U HOW TA SPELL!!.. - By far my fave line of your verse. Nice flip here. Overall: A very basic verse fam. Concepts amd execution was very simple here. -------------------- -------------------- ----------------- Verdict: Honestly very suprised at this battle. Neither came even 20% as good as they have done in the past. I dunno if these were keystyles but the quality was much lower than usual from you guys. One edged this slightly overall. FVC Global. Posted on: 2010-04-19 18:10:40

You the king? It’s treason, HAVE THEM SEND THE CALL and if your discussing gays; have you forGOTTEN THIS NERDS CERTAIN? I mean when he says ‘he has men BACKED AGAINST THE WALL’…he was TALKING IN THIRD PERSON…… this concept was doppe, the beggining was fillerish but the punch was nice. A self confessed VOYOUR WHO LOVES IT when it’s role playing like a LAWER IS PUNISHED but he doesen’t know who to watch…the BOY OR THE SLUT BITCH (Gaybo!) His punches, ALL HURTING AND COLD, so personal, WALL TOUCHING MY SOUL…pffft, only if I LOITER IN PUBLIC…… mehh i see where you were going here, had potential, just a wording issue. Compulsive liar, as BAD AS THEY ARE! Example: he’s in a GANG AND THEY HARD who were a BAND AT THE START, BRANDED AS STARS who MASTERED GUITAR on the PLANET OF MARS and word on the street? His pleaSURES WRONG; he GETS TURNED ON by dick DASTARDLY’S CAR! But his friends? They’re NOT FAKE YAWLL (Honoust!), and they always GON’ ‘AYE, WALL!’ or at least according to him…when ASKED WHERE THEY ARE (Gone awol)! wow, this took up alot of your verse here, the concept punch at the end was cool, i liked the wordplay, felt you wasted alot of punch space. the multis here were very nice though on a lighter note. See HERES THE THING, You should FEAR THE KING and stop being a Two-Faced Bastard!! Hope your QUICK TA FIND ATTACKS cus UnEth your like a “FART always talkin SHIT BEHIND MY BACK!!.. this was cool, actually hit somewhat for me.. but it wasnt direct enough and it was severly basic. I didn’t respond to your WACK ISH cus FAG BITCH I didn’t want to Embarrass ya BEST BARS, cus see this “DUMMY” must be FUNNY cus he’ll just “Crash into the Wall” like TEST CARS!!.. cool concept here, yet could have been flipped better (the concept) so that it is more complex.. Your verse? You shoulda CHUCKED IT cus to beat me you’ll need more then LUCK! SHIT I don’t know whats more “Forced” your Multies or the Girls you’ve FUCKED WIT!!.. this so far imo is your best bar.. See there is no OTHER, SUCKER! My “Rushed Hour” Bars will “Jackie Chan” Karate Kick like that BROTHER TUCKER then leave ya thinking Wall’s like a “Male Porn Star at a Milf Orgy”, He’s a Cocky MOTHER FUCKER!!.. You just got the Fire Started, I BURNED YOU DOWN TO HELL, "Mr. Grammatically Correct" Hear let me B "Honoust!" n LEARNT U HOW TA SPELL!!.. the cocky motherfucker line was cool, didnt really help as far as point wise, the closer just didnt hit for me. overall......... .............. both have come way harder than this, just read another verse from jwall and that shit was dope. and uneth usually brings the flames, rematch fellas.. low to high. peace Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-19 19:36:12

Really... Uneth .. u was sorta mentor to me on to vote n ish , gotta say yer verse said out loud... was Ok ... reading over it was Ok aswell... i eamn i think im steppin it up on voting ... to make sure people see why i voted , but .. yea some spots in yer verse .. was shaky not hate im Not a Pro i Kno that .,, but yea u had shaky moments Like dat Dick DASTARDLY CAR.. Ehh .smh i even Looked up tryna get a grasp on that .... which then i seen ya concept... ok should i have Put Mean machine sum whurr in Thurr, would've hit harder !! But i mean u gave an nice 8. with all yer categories( punches,multis,wordp lay...etc... to a 8-9 verse Here! Ok Jwall-- Imean ya opener , really Had that Damn To It... then The name play into Punch also Hit Hard for me , then the flow n build up to the Chicks ya effed with .. was nasty on a harsh level ...after that stayed on it till the end . as far as the categories -- push ya verse to a solid 9 + the fair is In... Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-19 20:02:30

ok nice drops from both. eth:You the king? It’s treason, HAVE THEM SEND THE CALL and if your discussing gays; have you forGOTTEN THIS NERDS CERTAIN? I mean when he says ‘he has men BACKED AGAINST THE WALL’…he was TALKING IN THIRD PERSON……A self confessed VOYOUR WHO LOVES IT when it’s role playing like a LAWER IS PUNISHED but he doesen’t know who to watch…the BOY OR THE SLUT BITCH (Gaybo!) His punches, ALL HURTING AND COLD, so personal, WALL TOUCHING MY SOUL…pffft, only if I LOITER IN PUBLIC……JWall? Compulsive liar, as BAD AS THEY ARE! Example: he’s in a GANG AND THEY HARD who were a BAND AT THE START, BRANDED AS STARS who MASTERED GUITAR on the PLANET OF MARS and word on the street? His pleaSURES WRONG; he GETS TURNED ON by dick DASTARDLY’S CAR! But his friends? They’re NOT FAKE YAWLL (Honoust!), and they always GON’ ‘AYE, WALL!’ or at least according to him…when ASKED WHERE THEY ARE (Gone awol)! you had some nice punches in there. some multis wee forced i think and there was one line i quite didnt get."but yea u had shaky moments Like dat Dick DASTARDLY CAR.. " meh,,, wasnt bad. but flow was on point. i think u could of placed your words, and structurd your verse a lil better but overall a nice drop.. good shit.. ............ .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... . JWALL:See HERES THE THING, You should FEAR THE KING and stop being a Two-Faced Bastard!! Hope your QUICK TA FIND ATTACKS cus UnEth your like a “FART always talkin SHIT BEHIND MY BACK!!.. I didn’t respond to your WACK ISH cus FAG BITCH I didn’t want to Embarrass ya BEST BARS, cus see this “DUMMY” must be FUNNY cus he’ll just “Crash into the Wall” like TEST CARS!!.. Your verse? You shoulda CHUCKED IT cus to beat me you’ll need more then LUCK! SHIT I don’t know whats more “Forced” your Multies or the Girls you’ve FUCKED WIT!!.. See there is no OTHER, SUCKER! My “Rushed Hour” Bars will “Jackie Chan” Karate Kick like that BROTHER TUCKER then leave ya thinking Wall’s like a “Male Porn Star at a Milf Orgy”, He’s a Cocky MOTHER FUCKER!!.. You just got the Fire Started, I BURNED YOU DOWN TO HELL, "Mr. Grammatically Correct" Hear let me B "Honoust!" n LEARNT U HOW TA SPELL!!.. (you spelled Honest like this Honoust!, so I misspelled that sentence on purpose) EMPIRE!!!!! ok punches hit pretty nice, not the best i seen from you but dope. u had some nice set ups. multis wrrent choppy in my opinion. and u had some very grimey lines in there. like the " forced multis and sex with girls" had me like WOW. and this line ,, my mouth ropped as well. "then leave ya thinking Wall’s like a “Male Porn Star at a Milf Orgy”, He’s a Cocky MOTHER FUCKER!!." that shit line hti smooth. ok well my fv is in. no hate at all. both respectred emcees. just went with in my opinion were the better, punches. gb fellaz. Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-19 23:14:35

gb Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-20 02:04:38

blocked eh? strange Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-20 03:52:39

i didnt block u po Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-20 08:51:47

Good read overall. Both verses kinda acme off lazily from middle to end. Rhyme schemes were definatley on point, but the content for both wasn't what I'm used to. Just not a lot of 'wow!' from both. I'd have to say setup wise JWall had a tighter grip, EtH had some really dope ideas though. EtH picked up head towards the end to me. JWall was more of the baseline throughout. The winner was the more consistent thru the whole verse. Keeping it 100, I'm not gonna beat a dead horse with a long expo...lol...both y'all know it's respect fa'dayz from here.. so the fair is dropped...pZz Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-20 10:44:32

fv Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-20 13:57:05

Good battl no hate. Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-21 17:24:34

send me an 8 ill mash both yall Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-21 17:54:34

ugggh. Voted: JWall /
Posted on: 2010-04-21 18:08:19