fv no hate hotlister both have expos mulit but one had lil bit more punches closee vb Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 16:18:03

ACS: opener was super sick..hella simple line with great complexity, i'm impressed already. a bit of filler til the 'blemished clit' punch...but it was a good punch..just stretched out a bit.'sailiing with cameras' line was solid, but the the phrasing was a lil off..as "sees my frame" doesnt quite hit hard, but still a good concept..i have no idea who Jaqcueline Moore was..but that is some very inventive nameplay..ok...the wordplay isnt quite OFF...but its quite forced in the sense you are using it...not too keen on that line leading to the corkless part....closer was a bit weak..but the concept and wordplay was sturdy. JACK: opener was quite crisp as well, and i like the concept her..wordplay was good too. ironically..YOU stretched that "wrestling holds" line lol..i had to go all the way back to catch the multi match, still a decent jab..licorice shit was ok..lotta filler here until the 'dotted line' punch...but that was a clever ass punch...wait..did you really just finish with that then attempt to swagger your way out of it? lol..not a good move, always finish strong and fill that box up with shit...j/k..really tho. OVERALL: both came with some good shit, and some filler...ones concepts were better executed here by a narrow margin. I'll toss 9s to get it hotlisted (hopefully) FVC Bitch Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:19:03

Swag.... enjoyed your opener.... whole shit leading up to blemished clit was all FIRE...lil forcing with the whore nun line... Lol at judge and Sees frame lines... clAssick shit right there....LMAO at rule ,Rep isn't damaged shit wow... jaqueline Moore play was nice...Ended strong as well...all in all, a high 9 here... great in all aspects, almost first 10 from me since January. ....on to Jack....First couple lines were pretty dope, no crazy punch but nice wordplay and multies...Real Nice law abiding citizen line.. great movie Lol..Finished It off with nice punches as usual.... another high 9...gd hard decision here both were on fire....concealed. ..top of hotlist soon...vb (but I know you wont)....fuck a tie winner gets the 10 Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:24:00

thughts one was a lil light, other had more polished verses n flow, no h8 vbf. Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:30:50

Lol that's why I have Str8 rippin blocked....HE'S A FUCKING IDIOT...haha a lil light??? Best battle in a while respect to both classick artists Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:41:43

PLEASE VOTE AND ILL VOTE AND IL VOTE BACK ON THIS BATTLE: http://ww w.letsbeef.com/battl e_details.php?sectio n=tb&id=345122 Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:41:48

Both Verses Were Real Nice. I Felt That It Was A Lil' Harder To UnderStand Some Of Swag's Lines. A Lot Of Them Were Solid, And On Point But Not All Of Them. You Feel Me? Although I Liked Your Use Of WordPlay! Now Jack-0-Lantern, I Liked Your Licorice Line. That Was Dope. Your Lines On The WWE Guys Was A Lil' Weak But Also Creative. So Props On That. AnyWay ...SomeOne One It With Just OverAll 'Dominating Verse' In A Lot Of Categories! But 'The Krhyme' Is Saying The Truth About That Wrestling Line Being Stretched! Respect The Fair Vote An Props To Both Swag & Jack. Dope Battle! Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:42:31

A certain swag got my vote in this battle! Sick lines man i like this one~You'll be QUICK TO DRAW GUNS? Only in a GRAPHICS CLASS, To dope man! "YNS OUT" Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 17:45:34

nice from what i've read... i'll be back to vote and give a wonderful expo... when i do please return Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 18:07:26

one was soo goddamn hard...FV no h8! Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 19:01:57

damn it this'll be a long expo... Break Down: Swag- opener was just beasting it out, like K said simple but well executed, flow was nice, structured well, concepts original, executed like a hanging, and surprisingly you went without any played lines about pumpking... good work// Jack- opener was nice, your flow is excellent, nice structure, ya got some good vocab, you set things up very well, and then you execute them nicely.... good work ~~ Best Lines: Swag- my favorite from you was--> Its like "Dislexia" the way he FAILING WIT GRAMMA, like a "Lunatic Judge" ill be FLAILING THE HAMMER, only time Jack "Sees/Seas" My "Frame" is SAILING WITH CAMERAS!!... second was---> I Didnt even want to "Waste Words" on this AGGRESSIVE PRICK, but im'a leev "Gay Murked" with A MESSAGE SICK, bashin his Skull till A CREVICE SPLIT, now this "Pussy's Face" lookin like A BLEMISHED CLIT!!//... then my 3rd favorite was ---> I think his EYES DECEIVED, Covered in Blood, Now “Watch” as i put my “Red Hand on his Lungs” so he got Minimum TIME TO BREATHE... Then He’ll “Float N Leave/Floatin Leaf”, And lose his “Bark” like DYING TREES!//... all of these were well set up and executed... good job// Jack- my favoite line from you was --->He ain't TEXTIN BOUT HIS SMITH AND'S, It's just the GAY HE MIGHT SHOW when he talks about "Tossing Me In The Ring" with some 'LADY TYPE' HOLDS, But his bars are "More Stretched Out" than WRESTLING SUBMISSIONS!!//... my 2nd was ---->That wouldn't be fair though, Like a GRIND TIME PRO versus John Cena, Or one of the guys from CRIME TIME... YO mute button... Your Tone-Is-Void, But It ain't hard to see why people LIKE MY PROSE, And "Swag Surfin" like "Soulja-Boy" still couldn't surVIVE MY FLOW!!//... and my 3rd was ---> Look, I'll take, And MAKE YOU DIE SLOW! Punches? "J's Rock" you could SAY THIS GUY'S 'STONED', But he'll never "Point With The Beam" to leave "Cons Hurt" like LASER LIGHT SHOWS!!//... like Swag's they were all nicely se up and executed... good job ~~ Overall: winner was a tough choice.... it was basically versitility & originality verse concepts & flow... both had hard punches and executed well but my descision came down to who i think had the better and more consistent delivery ~~ Scoring: winner recieves high 9 and looser recieves a higher mid 9... ya dig? ~~ fair is in and how can you argue against this expo... probably most thorough one here Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 19:36:16

^^damn that's longer than i thought Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 19:36:43

fv Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 21:00:56

Wow.. Good battle.. haent seen much of Jack shit but it was real nice.. Certain swag came hard too one of his top battles for fure.. this is a very close batle here.. im throwin nines.. voted Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-13 21:22:22

Good Battle. Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-14 12:30:28

Concepts Were Dope On Both Ends. -Student Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-14 15:45:09

damn this shit is CLASSICK! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-14 17:54:02

fv nh8 Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-14 19:06:05

yeah digging this battle.. where one was complex in concepts, but simple in rhyme scheme the other was the antithesis: sick rhyme scheme with a direct hits... i was really liking the undertones of Swag's verse to be honest. jacks verse was good but fell into bragadoccio as opposed to the direct hits he came out the gats with. keepin it 100 . high-mid -RhetoriK little filler here and there. the winner: opners and closers Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-14 22:12:55

jackolatern got ya gb Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 00:03:10

close as Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 01:56:35

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Posted on: 2010-03-15 03:24:09

fv no h8...great lines for both. very close vb Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 09:36:59

good ish Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 11:07:21

kicked some ass Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-15 12:00:37

Fv nhsick fuckin battle.... he edged it for me Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 15:30:14

PHUKIN SIK!!!!!! NO HATIN I THINK THE 1 GOIN 2nd HAS BETTER CHANCE OF KUMIN BAK HARDER THATS ALL BUT SICK SHIT Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 15:34:34

NIC1 Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-15 18:15:54

fair vote no hate Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-15 21:39:12

both came with different stye and flow but was feeling swag verse more than jack so no hate aight just peace...vb on my battle vs datboi... Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-16 00:43:14

Ohhhh K, I see the the Multies go to ACS by being more consistent then Jack. The Punches were about even although Jack was a bit fresher. The Flow went to ACS and Concepts went to Jack. The winner came down to a coin flip for me.....lol nah I looked for the wow factor and decided my vote on that! Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-16 09:02:55

vote back. this was sick Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-16 11:11:04

why am i blocked from voting...wtf is up Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-16 17:47:47

jackolantern Voted: Out Of Orderr /
Posted on: 2010-03-16 18:52:45