was gonna take this was too slow though GB and i key styled that verse i sent you doubleere lol jus some light work an FV is in Voted: DoubleErE / Pilate
Posted on: 2010-02-24 23:46:49

FV Voted: DoubleErE / Pilate
Posted on: 2010-02-25 00:26:23

DOUBLE---IM GUNNA START OFF BY SAYING YOUOU SHOULD REALLY CAPOTALIZE UR RYHME.. MAKES IT EASIR TO CATCH YAH FLOW AND PUNCHES..Im coming heavy in this game, and my rhymes real insaine,motherfuckas i aint tame, but your lame and a straight up snitch, cant fuck with this maniacal killa with a gangsta twist, ending lifes with a twist of my wrist, or a swing of my fist, its all one and one in the same, hanging suckas from a roof and a chain,.. ALRIGHT NO REALLY THOUGHT GOING INTO ANYTHING HERE ATE ALL.. NO BIG PUNCHES NUTHIN.. youll never gain the kinda respect that i towe, i murder motherfuckers and dont give a fuck if it stays on the low, cus i cant be seen by the coppers or federal helicopters, fuck with me and ill have ur dome getting worked on by some fucking doctors,… ALRIGHT ALRIGHT REAST OF VERSE IS JUS SAME THING AFTER SAME THING.. KILLIN LIKE THIS AND DON’T FUCK WITH ME.. NUTHIN BIG NUTHIN SPECIAL CONCPETS FLOW PUNCHES ALL LACKED THE WOW FACTOR..PILATE-----y ou can't be seen by a federal HELICOPTER, but you check this, you're bitch i just ROCKED HER/a swing of your FIST is more like a flick of your limp WRIST, a .40 cal stoeger COUGAR and a .357 chromed out RUGER just won't SUFFICE,fuckd like a downhill LUGER hittin' the wall in VANCOVER, u already ON ICE/,, MULTIS WAS A BIT FORCED AND A BIT OFF.. PUNCH WASN’T VERY EFFECTIVE AND THERE IS TOO MUCH GUN TALK IN HERE FOR MY LIKING… listen to those lines you SPEW, i swear this has to be a new language TO YOU, confused like a german in english 202, with out A CLUE, you sound like my little one year old NEPHEW, gi gi ga ga GOO GOO/ .. LMAO!!! WTF HA…These rhymes I drop come in my SLEEP, I can do this all NIGHT, like counting SHEEP, I hoped your porfolio is DEEP, you'd at least put up a FIGHT, but that shit was WEAK/ I know my GLOATING can be OBNOXIOUS, ego's BLOATING, some say it makes 'em NOXIOUS, but when you step up be real CAUTiOUS I'll just flip the script and say WATCH THIS. FINISHER WASN’T REALLY APUNCH AT ALL.. WEAK FINISHER MAN.. ALRIGHT FLOW AND MULTIS WENT ONE WAY.. NO BIG PUNCHES FROM EITHER SAND BOTH GOTTA UP YAH GAMES.. ILL GO LOW 7 TO LOW 6 ON THIS ONE GUYS!! Voted: DoubleErE / Pilate
Posted on: 2010-02-25 11:47:04

Thanks for the good write-up Mac, it's helpful to have the ryhmes analyzed. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-25 12:03:13

gb Voted: DoubleErE / Pilate
Posted on: 2010-02-25 13:22:32