fv is in no h8 but a clear winner here imo Voted: Pilate / Hyppi
Posted on: 2010-02-23 19:58:16

This is my first time to use this site? So you don't get a response verse? Also, I guess everyone CAPS their ryhmes, my bad. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-23 20:12:10

yeah im pretty new aswell dawg, you get used to it though good battle man Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-23 20:28:25

Thanks Man, you too. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-23 20:31:53

gotta give it to young d..gb an vb Voted: Pilate / Hyppi
Posted on: 2010-02-23 20:53:11

PILATE--- KINDA WEIRD HOW UR FLOW CHENGED COMPLETEYL.. BUT HERE WE GO!rhetoric and loose rhymes, you're rihanna; meteoric and big time, i'm chris brown/ you're beaten, hope LAPD doesn't sell your mugshot, no cheatin', there's no app that'll stop this shot/.. OPENER WAS ALRIGHT.. NICE CONCEPT AND OK PUNCH.. SETUP WAS OFF AND STRUCTURE SUCKS.. GET THAT CAPOTOLIAZATION.. HELPS A LOT/.. LARRY KING SHIT I WASN’T FEELIN REALLY/tell him you're ready for your close up, tell him you'll drink cum from a big cup/ you're confused, in a bondage scene with a nazi, you're abused, shouldn't like it but you say "gratzi"/.. I DUNNO WUT THAT MEANS.. SO ID SAY A WEAK PUNCH… no one's suprised, now bend over and take it in the fanny, the situation i'm apprized, that's why I always call you "Candy"/ but let's be real, you're more than just a queer, you're the gayest person i've ever seen around here/.. LMAO.. MADE ME LAUGH.. FLOW AND MULTIS WAS KINDA HARD TO FOLLOW.. DIDN’T EVEN USE MULTIIS REALLY.. UR STRUCTURE NEEDS MAAD WORK AND UR PUNCHES WAS MEGA LIGHT…..YOUNGDON---- PILATE you makin me IRATE// sorry bout your FATE as i STATE// that im GREAT so you WAIT// and SEE what HAPPENS// when YoungD starts RAPPING// or gun CLAPPING im SNAPPING// im LAUGHING at you HISTERICALLY// my RAPPING will be remembered HISTORICALLY//.. NOT TOO SURER WHWERE THE OPENER STARTS.. BUTT NO REALLY DIRECT PUNCHES.. FLOWS PETTY GOOD.. its YD and the NEW WORLD// you thinking WHY ME as i SCREW YO GIRL// I RULE the WORLD// with an IRON FIST and a GOLDEN TOUNGE// so beef WITH THIS and nigga BETTER RUN// fast like BOLT as i pull out the COLT// my flow is electric 1000 VOLTS hits you and you JOLT// its not my FAULT// im the hardest NIGGA on LETS BEEF// start and i'll HIT YA youll have LESS TEETH// its the new world RUNNING THIS// this battle im STUNNING THIS// like always i be WINNING THIS// so look at me GRINNING BITCH! ALRIGHT DIDN’T SEE VERY MANY DISSES.. MOSTLY TALKIN ABOUT URSLF AND SHOW HARD OR COOL OR HPW U RULE THE WORLD LOL.. GET THEM MUTIES AND PUNCHES AND U WOULD BE A LOT BETTER.. IM GOIN HIGH TO LOW 6 ON THIS ONE Voted: Pilate / Hyppi
Posted on: 2010-02-25 11:54:37

Gratzi is German for thank you, I thought it was clever. I'm trying to pick up the flow, it's a lot different than typical spoken word poems, I tend to change flow a bit which I'm seeing doesn't transfer real well in written text. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-25 12:10:53

thanks for advice dawg im only just starting really thanks man Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-25 21:45:11