expos - Hominy is the canned food used to make grits .. Obamas favorite rapper is Jay-Z Bob Dole is a Kansas senator with a limp right arm'n'dick but was the spokes person for Viagra.. he's crew's abbreviation is Factory and yes, I did diss the full name RHYME ELEVATION lol.. gL Swaggatron..DPS!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-05 13:03:40

this battle was actually really close, im throwin out two highs on this one.. certain swag- your flow, it was actually really good, just somtimes it was stretched and it messed up the delivery of the punches, the punches were there but could have been a little more creative, like the close could have been fliped better.. rhet- you had a couple really nice punches in the verse, like the opener was fresh, the fall back line ive seen before but you flipped it well, so yo got points for that one,.. id say work on the structure a bit because it makes your bars a little harder to follow.. also try and make everrry bar a hott bar and save the "filler", like the jayz line was corny and was pointless bro.. so the fairs in,was really close so i went with who had the best punch. Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-05 15:59:34

this was very close in my opinion swag is elevating fastly felt ones concepts in sum punches could have been realised a lil better but thats nit picking other dudes had stronger punches nice flow whilst not as good as other dudes flow, i felt their concepts were actioned that lil better all in all DOPE battle and a very good read Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-06 10:11:01

close battle guys very good read"S from both! but i think one edged it with a slightly better verse. jus by a hair fv is in peace guys goodluck to both! Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-06 11:58:06

lets see how close my vote is to the others, fair as Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-06 20:35:29

^way off^ I think we have different opinions Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-06 20:36:22

ok Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-06 20:59:32

Yep, Close Battle. Good As Well. Swag---Im a PROFFESSOR WIT VERBS, you Prey/Pray when the ‘Eagle-Shows’, bringing ‘Evil-Flows’ im’a AGGRESSOR WIT WORDS… Let the ‘Mag Mess Up Ya Verse’, battling me is a ‘Grave-Deal’, im the ‘Main-Meal’, Damn… Im letting him drop weight coz he HAVE-LESS-FOR-DESERT !!---Lmfao, Really Nice Beginner With Punches And Concepts Being Hot. Multies Were Also On The Point.---From now on his MOVEMENT IS OVER, this 'Alien' STUCK ON THE MOON, leave his 'Cranium' with more than a BUMP N-A BRUISE when i SHOOT THE PISTOLA! Its 'Obvious' you CHANGED YA PERSONA, Fuck a Crew, Im’a ‘Derranged-Loner’, BREAKIN YA RIBS coz you HATIN ON KIDS... But Me? you need them 'Lucky-Fours' like the SAME AS A CLOVER!---Had An Okay Flow, Bit "Messy" , Uhhh, The "Four Clover" Concept Was Really Creative, Went Well With That Punch But I Thought The Other Punches Weren't That Stong.---You don’t HOLD-THE-FOURS? My Lyrics? I ‘Told-The-Morg’ im’a be Killin a man… and they Made space when I SHOWED-THEM-YOURS! Haha, my name ‘Unmentionable’, put a Scarr on ya head like VOLDER…---Meh, Decent Line. Nothing Special. The Punch Was There, Not That Great Though.---Shhhhh! with DAMN FLAWS in ya WRITS, only time he ‘Grindin-Heavy’ is when a FAT-WHORE on his DICK!! -Swag---Lmfao, Nice Punch...Nothing More, Nothing Less. Nice Drop. RhetoriK---A CERTAIN FAGGOT-NIGGA with "half-cocked" "VIAGRA DICTION" "trying hard to get it off" like BOB DOLE'S ...."AGENDA!" ---From Your Previous Structure, I Prefer This, It Was Easier Too Follow *Just Too Note. Umm, Not Bad Beginner, Thought You Could Extend It A Lil', But Yeh, Not Bad.---my ONE-LINER .. DESCRIBES YA when I "DISS-MEMBER" - he needs to "give thanks" and "fall back" LIKE NOVEMENBER - he treats balls like a "BAD TEMPER" "blowin it" every CHANCE YOU GIVE'EM!!---Hmm, Kinda A Played Line, Coulda Been Better Constructed, And The Punch Wasn't That Strong Either. (nh).---you're the EPITOME of FAGGOTRY "less lines off the top" than JELLY JARS!! put lines "through this FUTURE STAR" like ASTORLOGY .. his mother uses TRAFFIC CONES for GYNECOLOGY .. your lines lack "girt" like UNPROCESSED HOMINY i feel like MICHELLE OBAMA when she met BARACK IN COLLEGE, SEE.. like "you better ELEVATE YOUR RHYMES you FAKE ASS JAY-Z!" .. and yes! take that broke ass Swagg BACK TO THE FACTORY cause .. it'll be a quick return cause [henh] you're the only EMPLOYEE G!!!---Alright, This Was A Nicely Done "Line/s"...Creative With The Concepts, Funny Punches Like The Barack In College. LOL. Umm, Multies Were On The Point And Yeh. I Think You Started Off Slow, But Then You Kinda Got Back Into After That, As In Better With The Punches/Concepts Etc...So Yeh. Seen Better. Anyway, Went With The Overall Harder Punches. My Fairs'n. No Hate!. Vote Back. Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-06 22:02:48

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Posted on: 2010-02-07 15:09:47

I could follow one more then I could follow the other. Yes, I re-read and still didn't understand where your flow was at all. Also had better punchlines and multies since they matched up. FV is in!. Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-07 15:28:20

........complexity Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-07 19:00:44

close. Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-08 05:36:28

A certain Swag, need to add a little more complexity to the punches, I just find your fillers are spanning out too long taking away from the effectiveness of the punches yeah know what I mean? But the flow was dope and the multies were ill good scheme going on there. Rhetorik I could see you got some concepts in there but the structure is off and hard to read, some broken multies as well. Just need to take some time to refine your verse before you send to make sure everything rhymes properly and that it flows well. Fv is in. GB Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-08 08:18:13

damn both were deff hott obviously hotlisters but expo:Swag ya flow was jus a lil choppy and deff no h8 it was so close tht i gotta count the little things so..Swags was jus a lil choppy and Rhetoriks was a lil off too but ima hav to give it to the one who had the most direct punches fv. no h8 no favs. in this battle Voted: Out Of Orderr / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-02-08 12:16:45