Both had some iffy wordplay, otherwise one had a solid but basic verse, the other came pretty fresh and had some nice punches. low to high. Holla! FVC Certified. Posted on: 2010-02-01 17:08:55

Expo- rowed-runner, roadrunner from loony toons..... ur tears give niagra falls its water..... cringe of times should be easy to get but pretty complex, don't sleep on that.... nig twat line refers to black girls having a purple pussy Lol....... pitcher reference bc I'm number one n pitchers... throw with they hand Lol... Fred durst was lead Singer of limp bizkit had song all about the nookie.. DON'T FV, VOTE FAIR N REAL lol I think me an swag can take real shit, drop an expo Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 15:53:47

Expo : 'Not-A-Damn/Notrdam' ------ Notradom is the place of the Hunchback character. Rest is self explanitary. Respect, good battle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 17:02:08

both came with good concepts felt the punches from one better though... fair vote is dropped keep it reall... respect to both emcees no hate at all promoted... Voted: Po a Fo / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 18:29:26

You better not be one of his DRs. ^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 18:32:06

Nigga shut the fuck up you look stupid I don't have any fuckin dickriders other than urself, get the fuck off it, we both came hard and its close, can go either way.... I think my verse s better and let me guess.. u think urs is so don't bitch about votes you lack character Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 18:36:42

Hahhahaa, Ok man... We see ^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 18:42:38

Ya find out how many pm's I send out... NONE FAGGOT I don't have time for that shit, my computer doent even work so that would take way too long on my phone... you're not good enuf to keep acting like an idiot so cut the bullshit Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 18:51:27

RHYME:: you had a good flow going but the way you switched between rhyme schemes seemed a little off to me. If you could get that down then you could be dope my man. You also had some broken multis in there so be aware of that. The watch line was your best line if you ask me, it was pretty ILL. Another good line was the "shovel" line, decent punch but you could have executed it better in my opinion. Overall a pretty decent verse in my books. SWAG:: you had a wicked flow man. I really liked this read. The boxing instructor line was your best punch, even though it is played out, it still hit pretty good. I liked your multies, even though some of them were pretty basic it held your verse together to make it a fun read. Just make sure you use less filler in your verse and more set ups. But you did that pretty well. VOTE:: i would say that punches go to Rhyme, the flow goes to, SWAG, complexity goes to RHYME, and structure goes to SWAG. Very good and close battle guys. Voted: Po a Fo / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 19:03:18

your all on drugs good battle Voted: Po a Fo / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 19:27:42

Im liking that expo good look partna Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 19:40:03

RHYME---Yo bitch sucked my WHOLE CREW in a line, so we call her ROWED-RUNNER! "took ur loony toon," yep STOLE NEW cuz she said my LOAD-FUNNER! I'm certain swag must have HE-WRECK-TILE/ERECTI LE DYS-FUNCTION cuz his BALLS NEED VIAGRA!...Your Opener was a solid C-, it was the word play was weak, adn teh punch was okay, but homoish. This opener is much better than shit agasint J Jop...uve stepped in THE-HECK-TRIAL DISS-JUNCTION, now ur tear FALLS SEED NIAGRA! while ur TOOTIN N BINGE FOR DIMES, I'm busy SHOOTIN A 'RINGE OF RHYMES! then hit ur dome so hard "I break your watch" cuz "the face" just showed the CRINGE OF TIMES! ima go get a swag shovel cuz he needs to DIG WHAT I'M SAYIN! then im gonna "leave this pussy purple"like a NIG TWAT THATS SPRAYIN!....Your middle area was easily ur best area..C+ rating, the punch was not to shabby, nice multies and good concept......see my movie is of a top ranked pitcher cuz i know FIRST HAND,while you're film is like a limp bizkit video cuz ur fred DURST PANNED! cuz queer is ALL ABOUT THE NOOKIE,which one will FALL N POUT? THE ROOKIE! "im now taking all bets on lets beef"cuz im on a BALLA-ROUTE, THE BOOKIE!...this was ur weakest point but not be much, The punch line at the end was okay, but need a tad more work..overally, C- agian....All in All, your verse are getttin better, and i am seein better punches............. .................... .................... ......Swag.---Ok, Ill get the 'Glock-Ta-Blam', this pussy is 'Not-a-Damn/Notradam ' MONSTER ON THE PEAK like 'Hunch-Back', Dickhead sendin to me? Ill 'Punch-Back' n leev him a GONER IN THIS HEAT, Fuckin Sniper... Ill put a BOMB-OVER-HIS-STREAK , then invite his MOMS-OVER-TO-EAT! (haha), coz His POPS DIDNT LOVE HER!?...Good opener but the wordplay was slippy, Not a Damn NOT RA dame..not the same, the punch was good, i give ur open a C+.....My 'Lenses-Are-Prone' to be TOPPING-HIS-STRUCTUR E but i aint 'Mending-His-Dome'/ this kid 'Must-Gaurd'! coz he couldnt 'Punch-Hard' if he was a BOXING-INSTRUCTOR!! Im'a MURDER-THIS-FAKE... coz you aint 'Shit-Son', I got 'Big-Guns' the GIRTH-OF-A-CRATE (Barrel), , I liked ur middle area, but it wasnt AS strong as ur opener, The punch was okay, wored better and better punch.....This aint gone be your 'Worst-Day', coz i 'Served' him on his 'First-Day', like BIRTH-ON-A-PLATE! Prick tells me he dont MESSAGE-RIDERS? well... My whole 'Font-Meat', if you 'Want-Beef' then im the BEST-PROVIDER, He dont Entertain the house... bring the 'T.V-In', if y'all want an 'Easy-Win', He the BEST-APPLIER!....Goo d Ending, nice punch, mutlies were good, solid c....All in All, you are also gettin better.............. .................... .................... ..........BOTH OF YOu....THis batttle was close and the punches are getting better...MID TO LOW, no hate..>FVC Voted: Po a Fo / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 21:05:10

ones concepts are played & goes round down marking creative mc's........gun punches don't register 4 me....fv. Voted: Po a Fo / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-02 06:45:53