Phil: Some nice ideas, flow was good mulits too. Punches need a lil work and overall verse could use some freshening up. Solid drop tho. Swag: Multis were hella nice, Quite nice flow here too. Some parts were really nice. Punches shoulda been harder but overall a nice drop! Overall: Felt both were good with the basics, one was a lil harder punching and takes my vote. FVC Certified. Posted on: 2010-02-01 14:29:09

aye shit's hot man! dope drop! nigga u elevated to a mad level in jus a few days man!Good job muh nigga i saw sum of da battles n u'r preety nice!holla!uh n btw check ma hotlistah with kurby! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 10:27:23

cheers man , i been reinspired lately :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 10:41:00

This was just a 3 minute type up, was really bored. Good battle fam! DPS! stay up Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 13:04:09

DPS Go Hard! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 13:07:35

DPS! all day Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-02-01 13:12:58

Ight, ones verse was a little to plain and simple with pratically just multies which were all good and it help perfect the flow but that was it, nothin really complex in that verse. The others verse had a nice flow as well with multies but he had punches on top of that with some concepts, were they dope? Not really, more played then anything and they were poorly put together. Anyways, take this how you want it. I know ya'll will hate but pointing out your faults should help improve yourself as a battler. Also, I might get bitched at the ratings but go'head and try to get a mod to delete it, but he wont cause he knows its fair.. If anything I was being a little generous. Peace. Voted: Tarrogant Wat / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 13:36:41

Phil--Like tyson punched a joint, YOU GETTIN ROCKED N ROLLED, try snipe this, GOT MISSLES LOCKED N HOMED, to collapse on you bitch, YA DESTINATIONS ZONED, comin at you like the credit crunch, T' DROP ON "HOMEZ" ,c4 clipped to ya body, DECIMATE YA BONES...Opener..Medi core at best..Why the fuck would tyson punch weed, makes no logical sense, but it works kinda. The ending bones line was weak. Flow was okay........fatty feeds the cannabals, AS HE EXPLODES, enough pork from this swine, TO GIVE THE WORLD A COLD, opt out now man, SELL YA SOUL , dps will take it from ya, FOR A DOLLAR OR SO, met me ya life aint worth livin, NOT EVEN BEFO', cos a fat ugly fuck like you, COULDN'T HOLLA A HO, GETTIN LAID FO YO, was like SHOVELIN SNOW.....Second weakest part right there..the ending was wack, i felt that punch was missing, you were just talkin and talkin, with no real good words comin from ya mouth......IN SNOW... AS IT SNOWED, its like this FLOW, TIRELESS ENDLESS, your outa gas, BEFORE I MAKE TO THE END BITCH, got no inhaler? YOU CAN SUCKA THIS END?-SHIT, was good enough for ya MOMS, NANS SISTERS N AUNTY CRIS, not Kristine, BUT YA CROSS DRESSIN, TURKY BALL' WITCH, nobody ever tell you, THATS YA DADY? "ICK"...WORST part of ur whole verse in my opinon..The fact that you said..In snow as it snowed, that was retarded...Your ending should be a great way to finish off, you finished off premature with no real punch===All in all, you got A LOT Of work to do, but mind you so do i, and so does everyone else................ .................... .................Swa g....Listen... This 'Ock-Lying', 'Stop-Typing' coz you make OUR-COUNTRY-LOOK-BAD , He aint nuttin close to 'Fillin-Me-Up', my BOWELS-HUNGRY-FOR-SN ACKS, this man is 'Washed-Up' like TOWELS-HUNG-FROM-THE -WRACKS! This COWARDS-PUNCHES-ARE- WHACK, you better 'Lace-Ya-Boots' and 'Face-The-Truth' that you be ASSAULTED-IN-RAP.... Okay opener, you need a stronger punch but it worked none the less. The multies were sloppy, OUR COUNTRY LOOK BAD and BOWELS HUNGRY FOR SNACKS, barely rhyme....coz its War when i got A-COLT-TO-YA-BACK! Ya 'Lyrics-Would-Still- Slip' even if you LAYED-SALT-IN-YA-TRA CKS!! Ill SPRAY-TECHS-AT-THIS- GEEZER n 'Fill-Em-Wit-Stitchi n', 'Kill-Em-In-his-Kitc hen' coz the only time He 'Cold-as-Ice' is LAYED-NEXT-TO-HIS-FR EEZER/ ...Okay middle, not ur best shit i hav read, but decent..punches still ned help lol......Damn, Stop FAKING, AND HUSH! Ok, He Altered 'His-Name' now he thinks he 'Got-Game'? False... You aint gonna win jus coz you CHANGIN-YA-LOOKS!? You'll be 'Given A-Ward/Award' just for WRITING-THAT-NONSENS E! You Suck! How can you battle me when ya FIGHTING-YA-CONSCIEN CE!? ---Swag---.....Good ending, but stil the final PUNCH should knock him out====alll in all, you are getting better and better, but ur punches are missin in some areas............... ..........to the both of you....DIVIDE YOUR CONCEPTS, make it easier on the reader to understand the thought of a new concept.....low to high..now the best battle you have done Swag...FVC no hate Voted: Tarrogant Wat / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 14:49:07

One hit harder for me. The other came with a sick intro then fell off imo Voted: Tarrogant Wat / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-01 23:22:01

ones concepts are played & goes round down marking creative mc's........gun punches don't register 4 me....fv. Voted: Tarrogant Wat / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-02 06:45:16

Phil-E got a little softer at the end Swag went hard the whoe time... no h8 Voted: Tarrogant Wat / Out Of Orderr
Posted on: 2010-02-02 14:04:55