FVVB Voted: FundaMental / Joey Krack
Posted on: 2010-01-22 20:24:12

ju was on a different level than fun...kind of obvious who won but - fun you had some descent (basic really) concepts and you rmultis didnt really match up...lines were ok at best...ju had nice concepts with good metaphors...multis were good (off at times)...nice closer...like i said - obvious winner...fairness Voted: FundaMental / Joey Krack
Posted on: 2010-01-22 21:42:35

thats crazy shit cause i swear dudes shit dont even make sense and who raps lmao in their shit... swiss cheese nozzel never heard of it and where did anything rhyme.. guess yall dont get much raps up there in conn. only thing i even thought was decent was the christian thing... Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-22 21:59:31

hehe thats a funny statement about CT becuase im actually from detroit, mr. michigan...anywho - ill go to greater depths to show you what i mean... "Ive got a lullaby to sing so I can put you to SLEEP// my nines be singin’ “rock-a-bye” when I push back ur MEAT//"...ok all i see here is a sub-par rhyme of sleep and meat...you put caps around "rock a bye" like it was a meta or a multi, but served no purpose in the line..."if I see you on tha street Ill be like “RUN BITCH RUN”// beat ur ass like MA$E have you taken up preachin’ n puttin’ down ur gun//"...again, another sub-par rhyme of gun and run...the concept was a little better than the first one, but wasnt set up well...also, felt as though this line was jumbled (too many words for the line to fit)..." you’re a “fake style rapper” a “half-way CROOK”// I aint “Mobb Deep” but I still got ya SHOOK//" another descent concept with a weak punch...at this point, you should have had one or two quality punches to pick up momentum, but all i see is a played concept about mobb deep...theres half of your verse - i dont feel as though i need to go any further... Voted: FundaMental / Joey Krack
Posted on: 2010-01-23 09:24:27

now ill break down jus verse to the point i did yours...." lmao ; ARE YOU SERIOUS?. Catch Me STROLLIN YOUNG DUNNY'S that'll "POP YA " ; You Ain't BedRocking Noone Even If You Was ROLLING w/ YOUNG MONEY PARTNA/" for starters, you dont actually read "lmao", he was talking about your verse - its not part of his verse, just an intro...ju kinda abuses the caps lock button in this verse i must say...'strolling young dunnys' and 'rolling with young money' is a broken-ass multi but atleast he understands the concept of multis...before that he mentioned "you aint 'bedrocking' none" - perfect example of a metaphor that leads up to the young money line, something you failed at in the beginning of your verse..."shoot this nigga . Your LINES IRRELEVANT PUNK ! ; You Can't see the team WITH THESE GOGGLES. & i'll pull the tech w/ a SWISS CHESSE NOZZLE the size of a ELEPHANTS TRUNK ." this time he did a better job of capping his rhyme and lining up his multis to match up...concept was a little weak but still he executed it..."!Fuck These BITCHES ...YOU'LL BALL?.. The Bars Im Writing. You Can't FUCK WITH THIS HATER. + Your Chick. FUCK WITH THIS PLAYER The Way She SWISHES MY BALLS.! " another descent multi was a better concept...rhymes werent always the best but hes got the fundamentals........ ...youre welcome Voted: FundaMental / Joey Krack
Posted on: 2010-01-23 09:35:15

fv Voted: FundaMental / Joey Krack
Posted on: 2010-01-23 13:46:03

Pritty basic and one sided. But good drops from both, Respect Voted: FundaMental / Joey Krack
Posted on: 2010-01-23 13:46:34