This Is Mine :)...Do You Mind? Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-21 00:41:38

expos 1. NAVAJO INDIAN= NAB A HOE IN THE END.... 2. SCORCH AGAIN=SKORCHEAGIN... Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-21 00:42:45

Hoodrich tha shit.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-21 00:43:27

Yayo send em Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-21 00:48:25

Can People Read These Days? Obviously Fucking Not. Smh...Nice Shit Yayo. A-R, Considering Your Just Inconsiderate Or Dumb, Nice Drop. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-21 00:50:42

Dont trip bro, I just beat u to it Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-01-21 00:51:54

juss look out for peeps that are already writin on shyt A-R... juss courtesy ya know? ya verse was nice too... thought yayo had a mean flow goin on here, and very complex... the puns actually made sense both ways so u get mad props fo that. fair votes fa real, no hate yall... please vote back on mah brown trout battle... ~KwZ~ Voted: BvckHvndz / A-R
Posted on: 2010-01-21 01:55:45

When did this dibs on battles shit start? If ya got bars? Ya got bars. Beside, i seen stephen reconsider dropping a handful of times- now thats inconsiderate- what about the rest of us fine fine people. Lol, good battle. Voted: BvckHvndz / A-R
Posted on: 2010-01-21 02:23:15

Concealed Skullzzy! Drop A. Your verse was pretty good. It consisted of some good punches, such as "nawww.. cos his 'SWAGS DEAD BROKE!' even got 'arm less cats' PITCHIN IN!!". Nice punch, played a bit, but presented differently which accelerated the aggresiveness of it. The Jewish and German line was a good setup but horrible ending. The Skorchegean part was hella mean man.Wasnt expecting it, also wasn't expecting what you put at the end. You cant have a setup thats better than the punch itself man. Watch that k, good verse. Grading is as follows. FLOW: C+ ~ CONCEPTS: B ~ PERSONALS: F (no personals) DELIVERY: C+ ~ CONSISTANCY: C ~ STRUCTURE: B+ |||| Drop B. Your verse was suprisingly nice man. It took a while to get it going but when it got going it was very well thought out. Like your first punch "or I'll MAKE HIS FACE SEPERATE like BREAKIN A HUDDLE" was very nice and a new concept. Very well delivered as well. Major points scored there. Also the "he got on a stray jacket in a jail cell, cuz his punches ain't STRIKIN DA BARS" Was creative. It may be played but I havent seen it before, and again, it was executed very nicely. There was filler throughout the beginning, and towards the end, but the drop itself was nice bro. You have skill in connecting rhymes, dont lose that trait when you battle, it works for you. I will tell you that it may be hard to pick out your similes and setups to others because there is no distinct character that sets them apart such as the symbol " or the symbol -. That eats away at your structure a bit. Grading goes as follows. FLOW: B+ ~ CONCEPTS: B+ ~ PERSONALS: D+ ~ DELIVERY: B ~ CONSISTANCY: C+ ~ STRUCTURE: C+ |||| Fair is in and explained as well as concealed. Respect it or send it is the motto..skull..GANG!! Voted: BvckHvndz / A-R
Posted on: 2010-01-21 02:53:38