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Wilson (100%) WINNER

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Reppin: Auburndale, Florida, United States

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oh shiittt THIS'L STOP HIM, this DISS'L DROP THEN youll see "grid dissapear" like SIGNAL PROBLEMS!! this CUNT CLAIMS to be hard, but hes just CHUMP CHANGE youll see "style in the air" like STUNT PLANES!! this RIDDLE AH IS FLAME, this LITTLE BITCH IS LAME, GRIZZLE UP HIS FAME then THIS'L BUCK HIS BRAIN and have this "G feeling stuck" like the MIDDLE OF HIS NAME!! sayin how youll GRIP N BLAST TOOLS, wow ISNT THAT COOL, but "dopeness" your MISSIN THAT FOOL, LISSIN WHACK DUDE ill "peel you back" like a KID WITH SCAB WOUNDS! your SHIT IS FLAT.. YOU fag!!! smack give you "blush cheeks" for real my WRIST IS THAT COOL..... then my FIST'L BASH THROUGH my TEXT SHOWS PROPPER LINES, LETS GO! OFF YA LIFE... got some "dirty thoughts" well when that "birdy pops" your top will be "surely off" to EXPOSE YOUR ROTTEN MIND!!!! Go to bed homo! lookin for 200 wins xD

GriddyGstyle187

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WILSON?  yee i will SON-take-u-up-on-your-offer-n-show-you-da-ILL ONE-you must be STILL DUMB- to EVER>COMPARE>TO>ME-im coming so-F'N UNEFFORTLESSLY..HOMO you stiLL PISSING SO UNCOMFORTABLELY..  SQUATIN N BITCHING.. IMPOSTA YOU SNITCHIN.. IT'LL cost YOUR MISSION try'N to POP ME? U MISSIN! IM WHAT YOU'LL NEVA BE-100% CERTIFIED,UNSTOPPABLE G!..  IM IMPOSSIBLE B.. YOU CAN'T BATTLE WITH THEE.. I'LL TURN YOUR BEEF INTO MAD COW DISEASE.. IM SICKA DEN THA SWINE FLU.. YOU THICKA WIT YA SKULL DUDE ( NO BRAINS )  COME CATCH ME CHILLIN iLL LEAVE YOU LYING LIKE YOU GIVIN BIRTH TO ( CHILDREN )  CUNT MOTHAFUCKA= YOU STINK.. YOU GUNNA NEED CHRIS(angel)to LIFT ya- ASS MAKE YOU DISAPPEAR.. WHILE YOU LOOKIN IN THA MIRROR-I BREAK DAT GLASS..U AINT NOTHING TO FEAR..  YOU PHONY- YOU FAKE..  ( DATS DA TYPE PEOPLE I HATE ) YOU LONELY- YOU SHAKE ( DATS FO.. FU*kIN WIT THA GREATS )

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Battle started: January 16^th 2010 at 22:36
Challenger joined: January 18^th 2010 at 14:23

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JussA Mazing Basic Member	HEYYYYY MR. WILSOOONNNN!!!! guess what...your punches, mutlies...ETC..took this for me....return if u like Voted: Wilson / GriddyGstyle187 Posted on: 2010-01-20 22:15:22
Step S	UNDiSPUTED Comment Only Posted on: 2010-01-20 22:58:04
NAWKOUT_ARTISTT Basic Member	Concealed Skullzyy - Drop A. Your verse was nice and flowed insane. Your opener really cought my attention. It was probably the best line of the battle in my opinion. "oh shiittt THIS'L STOP HIM, this DISS'L DROP THEN youll see "grid dissapear" like SIGNAL PROBLEMS!!" was both short, to the point, and effective. Nice. There was alot of filler in your verse that I noticed. Be careful of that, its not always a good thing to have an extended setup. Other than that your verse was very well thought out and included many personals to back up your creativity. Such as the line "THIS'L BUCK HIS BRAIN and have this "G feeling stuck" like the MIDDLE OF HIS NAME!!". Lines like that overpowered your verse. Grading is as follows - FLOW: A - CONCEPTS: B+ - PERSONALS: B+ - ORIGINALITY: B - CONSISTANCY: C+ - STRUCTURE: A \|\|\|\|\| Drop B. Your verse, to be honest, was not appealing to me. There were broken styles all over. Like for instance, using "-" through the whole line threw the flow off major. Then into the next with the arrows messed me up even more. To take it a step farther, it wasn't a response to a battle verse. It looks and flowwed more like a cypher or freewrite. Learn how to flip concepts and attack on nameplay, and structure better, and you'd be a much bigger threat. Like, NEVER Cap your whole verse. Thats just ugly and it hurts the readers eyes. Also, you used concepts that have been being used for a while bro. Be much more creative and think out your attacks. If you want me to show you, just hit me in a message. Get down with SG, we'd be glad to have you! Grading is as follows- FLOW: C-, CONCEPTS: C-, PERSONALS: F (no personals in verse), ORIGINALITY: C+, CONSISTANCY: C, STRUCTURE: F \|\|\|\|\| Fair vote is in and explained. Respect it or send it is the motto..skull..GANG!! !! Voted: Wilson / GriddyGstyle187 Posted on: 2010-01-21 02:09:05
Moskow Banned	haha Scab line was dopee fair is in no hate Voted: Wilson / GriddyGstyle187 Posted on: 2010-01-21 19:14:25


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