correction on last line "About to 'Make' "EX-HONOR-8"/exonera te like being "CLEARED OF CHARGES" Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-13 17:39:08

O_G!!!!----'Pipsquea k' 6 feet is your "DEPTH IN THE GROUND" cuz your "Style's looking Shitty" like you "DRESSED IT IN BROWN!" and yall'd only see "Ech" before "O" in "REFLECTIONS OF SOUND!!"(echo)...--- 0_o, omg, that shit was MADDDDD DOPE!! opener hit like nothin else can, concepts crazy... and the delivery was perfection...damn!! 2 punches there nearly KO right there----- You'll STRUGGLE THROUGH THIS ROUND n "After Submission" Scream "UNCLE TO THE CLOUDS" get 'Caught Right in The top' n since 'Dogs Bitin Alot' I'll put this "MUZZLE TO HIS MOUTH!!"---okay, hype went down a lil, but the punch was still good, hit hard, the concept nice and the delivery koo, the flow still uppin..good shit-----.. Stop ACTING TIGHT with that WACKNESS HYPED like you been RAPPING RIGHT, cuz he's "Drenched-In-Sweat" i can see "Ex-Is-Tense"/existe nce like "HAVING LIFE!!"---oooo, word/nameplay, is dope here, the punch hit hard and the concept was great, i feel the delivery and flow could have been better executed but still dope line----.. Even if your whole TRIBE, TRIES TO BACK ME DOWN still- I MIGHT JUST BLAST THREE ROUNDS n GRAB FOURS that'll "CLAP-MORE" than "HIGH FIVES N HAPPY CROWDS!"--lmao, the flow was great, the style is nice...punch was nice, concept was okay, but the delivery mad this line dope ...------.. Look this QUEERS RETARDED, he Hates on the Horror Core? but "FEARS THE DARKNESS" cuz i'm "REVERED AS HEARTLESS" with "Text Hot as Flames" about to me "Ex-Honor-8"/Exonera te like being "CLEARED OF CHARGES!!!!!"..---da mn, good way to close a verse, the flow was nice, stuck with the same rhyme scheme thru 2 nice punches...nice shit homie...like the darkness line, cuz i've acually seen ex dissin on horror core lmao..so it was nice...then the exonerate was nice too..wordplay great...OVERALL..DOP E ASSS VERSE!!------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- ------------EXALTED! !!!! --wonderin how to be an OG as an e-thug…I was never GIVEN AN ANSWER holdin a swisher posin in pictures like VIXENS N’ DANCERS lookin like mike jones….STRICKEN WITH CANCER! ---punch and concept was nice, i like the style too, but the opener didnt hit as hard as it could've-----the DUDES A BUCK TWENTY its TRUE, YA JUST FUNNY! your credibility has LONG GONE AWRY tough talkin but can’t “fill out ya sleeves” how you gon STRONG ARM A GUY?---okay, line was decent, complexity was there and the concept was nice...punch hit good, delivery was nice...still not feelin a lot of Hype tho----- shouldn’t even ATTEMPT TO RAP, CHILL i’d never speak if I had a REYNOLDS WRAP GRILL true story dudes corny and so “stiff with the craft” he's a DEAD MIME FOR ME “rock him/rakim to sleep” like 18th letter BEDTIME STORIES---okay, best line so far, the concept, wordplay, and delivery collabed to one big punch...good shit, this was a nice line...----- oh MY YOU IS STUPID n' whats effin worse is that I read his verse and “saw more ex’s” then my HIGH SCHOOL REUNION---the one rhyme- punches getting kinda salty but the concept and punch in this line was still SICK AS HELL...another great line and the hype is uppin...good shit here, flow is nicely delivered as well---- got ol' mike jone’s mom callin, she knows NOTHIN ABOUT PATIENCE eager to “swallow ex again” like a RECOVERIN OUT PATIENT but if she DESERVIN A TASTY PLATTER i'll “hit the spot” before she get a SERVIN OF BABY BATTER!---nice closer,, feelin the concept and the punches were hitten nicely...----------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- ------------OVERALL- - i feel that O G came with more hype and harder hitting punches..compared to the complexity and flow..with nicely delivered punches of ex... it was really a good battle, honestly up in the top 5 i've read so far....good shit to both...no hate..FVC! Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-13 21:31:28

look son don't start that swayin shit, learn how to somethin besides nameplay usin ex and make sure your shit makes sense...........when you figure out how to "make exonorate like being cleared of charges" be sure to let me know Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-13 21:32:05

i read both lines twice nd ones verse stook out more to me...no h8 great battle both! Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-13 22:05:14

this is gonna be close...so i wont sway, holla for a detailed expo if you want...but one had two lines that LITERALLY made me lol. both were hot, but one had that "OH SHIT" aspect to me. FVC BITCH Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-13 22:23:32

Its just business.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-13 22:48:32

one had some shit that didn't really make sense in both contexts which was the decider for me. both were nice though, should hit the hotlist. Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-13 23:10:41

Exalted lol... i didnt emphasize the "make", and Exonerate to be cleared or acquitted? "EX HONOR EIGHT" my eight lines? Are you that ignorant? Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-14 00:19:20

no you are that ignorant, because what you don't understand is that the statement doesn't make sense in BOTH senses of the metaphor........you think the nameplay is clever so u throw it in there when really it doesn't actually make any sense...........noti ce jason's comment? seems he agrees Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-14 09:15:35

someone blocked me..but i would prolly have to give it to og Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-14 10:17:38

Because jason sucks your dick im supposed to agree? You didnt even finish your lines, And if "Swag" wasnt a factor jason wouldnt win a damn battle. It's VERY obvious to understand, And the fact that you cant understand it proves me original point, You're an idiot. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-14 19:34:00

i didn't finish my lines? what the fuck are you even talkin about? when you battled me on your orthodox account you had the same damn problem, your wordplay doesn't make sense in both contexts and thats the reason illy voted against you..........get it through your head son..........and i like how you said you chewed my ass up with "personals" lol when in actuality i clowned on you bein a skinny mike jones look alike with a fake grill haha if only a couple of the readers knew that its all true Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-15 01:20:01

Mike jones is black, i'm 155, i have a 4500 dollar grill that i wore 1 time lol, So you didnt really do shit besides say some lass ass verse that didnt have shit to do with me... But nice try Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-15 01:43:07

And you never finish your lines, You spit like 3 filler sequences of multis then switch it up with differeny sylables but do the exact same thing, ur lines are to short. Finish them. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-15 01:44:50

It's Jus Business... O_G your fuckin Orthadox... you whooped my ass you fucker Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-15 09:28:56

Two very different styles in this one...O_G; Opener was dope, funny & creative nameplay. Next line was also tight, nothing special but flowed smoothly to make for a good punch. The Ex is tense wordplay was dope but the punch its-self was lacking something, i dunno what but something lol. Dope idea tho. high 5 punch was mehh, surprised to see you actually dropping something of that nature, thought it was light. Picked up on the closer, thought it was again, creative nameplay + executed nicely. Overall a very nice verse...Exalted; That Mike jokes opener was funny as hell. Strong arm punch was tight too. wasn't really feeling the mime punch tho it was decent. High school reunion line was hottttt, had me rollin a lil lol. Out patient line was niice, not your usual but still ok & your finisher was decent but nothing special...Tough decision on this one, think it could go either way...Went with the verse that left a bigger impact on there opponent & myself...Fairness is dropped...Respect it... Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-15 15:56:59

gbn Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-15 16:17:27

"Jason sucks your dick" hahah. welll, in that case lemme break it down a lil.... that shit bout him biting doesnt even apply because he never bit anything so it doesnt even have much relevance therefore isnt hard hitting at all.. then you said "about to me "Ex-Honor-8"/Exonera te like being "CLEARED OF CHARGES!!!!!".. "...you said your about to make Ex honor eight.. how's that even a punch?? anyway i dont really care nuff to explain it.. if i suck so badly send me a few lines.. 8 only tho. Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-15 17:33:57

. Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-15 17:52:26

voted for the more polished verse.. good read tho Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-15 18:32:39

PUNCHES:haha i like dat echo line from o_g. u threw in some good punches in there with concepts that led up to it that made it sting. FLOW:O_G pretty cool flow....EE ur verse was mad stretchheddd outttt... gets pretty lame reading it when its all stretched and forced out. and the 2 rhyming words .....try..using some rhyme scheme to better it ....Personals: well EE had em but wasnt really shook by it. MULTIES/RHYMES: OG... just wasnt affected with EE. METAS: EE had better metas but OG had stinger punches...WORDPLAY: og like ur existense wordplay but yeah that exnorate didnt make sense about to me exhonerate? wth.... EE rock him was good and the whole ex thing..but the ex wordplay with the girlfriend concept is sooo played. but chyeaa. someone just got the win ....fair. Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-15 20:03:37

Eight lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-16 01:36:20

^^ By 8 he really means 64 lmao...he's been going banana's with his battles lately lol... Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-16 09:51:31

Okay, Im done arguing, Come on this shit's out of hand lol... Look Ex this is what i meant, You were very adamant about me sending only "8" lines. in the forums. i said "he Hates on the Horror Core?" In my last line, So apparently you weren't honoring my verse, So the "Honor" Eight" was a multiple reference, It actually was a personal i just didnt make an expo, Didnt no ur boyfriend was going to require one lol... Naw but calm down, Good battle i cant bitch u have credible votes. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-16 10:28:41

someone still blocked me? Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-16 10:48:54

^^^you better not unblock this dumbass so he can vote for you Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-16 14:22:52

og, ex u can send.? Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-16 14:51:38

well say whatever u want about anything, i have a problem deciphering your wordplay in a way that fits both senses of the word.........and i also have a problem with you, for some reason, actually thinkin you are better, have a better verse, and deserve to win a battle, any battle, against me..........crazy... ........and i also don't like seeing these battles with you voting askin them to vote back on your battle with exalted echelon, like this retarded kid above me who gave me a 7 after you voted for him and almost certainly didn't bother readin Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-16 17:07:53

fv respect Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-16 19:46:11

fair is in no h8... um this was a heated battle... would have been closer but one jus wasnt consistent the whole way thru but did have some good lines... however the other had a mean opener and just killed it the whole way thru but good shit from both... vb fair on my recents Voted: O_G / Exalted Echelon
Posted on: 2009-12-16 19:54:35

k, i beat u in a personal battle, so keep crying. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-16 19:56:05

anybody can steal one every once in a while sonny, you've already lost a personal battle under orthodox so take your one win and be happy Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-17 00:40:11

yeh anyone can be like u and steal an open keystyle, That's your whole M.O. And i still sent first and beat you, So cry more... And we HAVE NO BATTLES against "orthadox" so nice try... retard, it's 2-2, And i got you on the personal, that you FINALLY agreed to have. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-17 17:52:17