Educated Vote:: Miss Fire, Your Very Nice With Using Words, You Know How To Construct Them To Diss The Opponent, Some Vets Even Struggle With That, I Do Lol, But Anyways, Nice Verse You Laid In Response, Very Well Structured, Guido, Brave On Dissing Fire, You Came Hard But All I Can Say, Is Expand Your Vocab And You'd Be a Much Bigger Threat, I Would Tell You Alot More, But Expansion To Vocab Is The Thing You Do First In Order To Build The Rest Of Your Verse, For Example 1: imma NICE RAPPER who FIGHTS ACTORS whenever i GLIDE WRATCHETTS he'll see SKIES FASTER than FLIGHT BATTLES, Example 2: he's good at RAPPIN? no, good at ACTIN, because i'll WRAP HIM in PLASTIC...EX 1 Was A Bit More Expanded Vocab -Wise Than EX 2, Work On That And Then You Can Challenge With More Fierceness, Also, Battle Vets And See How They Construct Words, Battling Those Who Are Better Than You Make You BEtter, Always FAir N Explained, - Respect - ..::Infamous (1)nez::.. Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-27 22:17:25

Avatar Is Sexy As Hell LOL Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-27 22:17:53

TJ_ good read n verse here , which others probably wont take time to read it , which i did all around good 8 , saw ya throw jabs here n thurr, some punches missed nad some laded on a lo end_ok_Miss_ Goog 8 also really ya had stinging jabs also with mid punches here , which means ya deff had good setups , all in all i gotta keep this concealed , the fair is In...Both of ya can return it on my recent if ya like ... good battle n good luck to both Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-27 22:27:59

nice Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-27 22:34:41

GB FV Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-28 00:51:06

GB, One Edged, Vote back on me vs sa anz Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-28 02:07:14

i hate it when SoulRite pre-posts what i'm thinkin' lol...whaddup, yeah... Miss Fire feedback: very easy to deliver lyrics with clear purpose.. now it's time for coplexity and amp up the knockout power by thinkin as you write it "how many different ways can i flip this line" make them connect and the verse itself will become one big punchline if you will... guido feedback: i feel almost the same way about your verse. yeah it rhymed really well but the punches weren't there because it just rhymed.. ya know.. when i read a verse and i read a bar and think about why they flipped that bar that way... i have to be sayin' "oh damn" every bar.. your verse had promise, but both of y'all need to spit the spar stronger. peace to SR too he broke it down well... if y'all don't like the outcome..send it, i'll be here ;) -DPS- Voted: tjguido / Miss Fire
Posted on: 2009-11-28 18:04:30