you had like the whole week to reply lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-11-14 16:52:16

not even my style anymore....AB negative is a rare blood type and you cant get a high five if yhu back handin....only expos necessary Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-11-14 16:54:49

My bad bro, i wrote up like 4 of the lines thursaday, and juss finished the rest earlier.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-11-14 16:55:11

not fair on the crew name lol cuz i wusnt in a crew when i sent this =P lol u play dirty huh? nice drop lol you had another account before this one? whut wuz tha name? Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-11-14 16:56:38

I'd rather not speak on accounts. lol.. but we know each other very well, good luck bro. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-11-14 17:01:38

Dope battle but the nigga woah is pretty nice. Return the fair. Voted: Jdot So-Well / WoWZeRZ
Posted on: 2009-11-14 17:09:11

This Shit Definitely A Hot Lister, Dope Concepts From Both, One Edged It By Snip'en And Play'en With Young ILL's Verse, Fair Is IN, No Hate, Vote IT BACK (FAIRLY), PEACE ! Voted: Jdot So-Well / WoWZeRZ
Posted on: 2009-11-14 18:06:20

All is fair no h8 but I feel like one got it wit the punches. Voted: Jdot So-Well / WoWZeRZ
Posted on: 2009-11-14 18:47:45

woah is in the "back hand" clique cuz he never comes close to reCEIVING "HIGH FIVES" Good shit ILL Voted: Jdot So-Well / WoWZeRZ
Posted on: 2009-11-14 18:48:22

Young ILL: opener kinda mehh.. broken multi's n not much creativity or set up to the punch, you did have a punch there tho, so credit for that... next couple of bars, started off kinda ehh actually the multi's n flow was on point tho, but as far as punching n all you upped yourself n was ehh, then it started to pickin up to story tellin about woah lol, it had nice imagery n all, but this isn't a topical, ya wanna hit your opponent hard.... next bar was a nice attempt as a 'crew' punch, I def. liked the concept off it, and although this was just filler n didn't help you much in anyway i liked this" line extra healthy from EATIN LIGHT RHYMES", thought it was pretty funny... closer wasn't really much of a punch either.... ya def. gotta start setting up your punches and being direct at your opponent cuz you have some good lines you just didn't throw the punches with those lines.. maybe take a lil off focusing on your multi's n throw in some wordplay to set your punches up..... Woah: opener was hella nice, the punch hit hard, and was a good hit on nameplay, one critique tho, that opener went into the 4th line of your battle.. was mad long n took that long for that big punch, when you could of had 2 in there... next bar again mad long, but a sick dope nameplay punch, haha love the concept on that one, the 2nd muti in that bar was broke from the rest tho.... next bar was pretty much the same expo as i gave for the other 2, also ya misspelled panicked, and the beginning of that bar the flow was kind fucked... and closer was alright, added uppin yourself in the punch tho, so it didn't hit that hard, you had a lot of sick punches tho, critique for you is def. try n shorten you bar as much as possible, cuz your bars drag out for hella long, n take up a lot of room where you still can be punching, also although you had a lot of hard hitting punches, i noticed all of them were nameplay... i mean nameplay is great, but for some people too much nameplay kinda proves you can't come out with a real concept, if you couldn't use nameplay.. nonetheless nice battle!! Stay up.. N Goodluck to both!! Voted: Jdot So-Well / WoWZeRZ
Posted on: 2009-11-14 22:24:54

^ i already changed up my style, i sent this to him like a week ago Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-11-16 09:36:34

Gs Voted: Jdot So-Well / WoWZeRZ
Posted on: 2009-11-17 17:06:27