honestly tokenit your verse would seem so much better if you just capped your multis coz you actually had multis in your verse (ain't no good/neighbourhood, reciept/the street, this song/just wrong, it's fixed/in six, 2 more/to four), voting is not easy not everybody has that kinda time so any efforts to make your verse reader friendly is always well appreciated !

thoedt using the same words to rhyme in every line is a huge risk unless you going for a realy strong ass punch concept which is gonna troll your opponent instead of just dissing them, you know the over kill sorts, but such was not the case here. which made ur verse seem even more ordinary and less creative also you did not fill up the box at all man, thats considered an auto loss here. hope you stick to the structure thats specified here for better luck next time.

Bars were weak on both sides in my opinion... Structure as well as concept lacked immensely. Step it up fam.  You'll get eaten alive out here.. fv is in. Peace

Fill the box!.

Toke- need alot of work. Develop some set ups n punches n work on multies n structures

Thoe- some alright content. Get some structure going n u b a problem. N try not to use the same words more than once in a scheme that frown upon that here.

Fv