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Length: 8 Lines

J~Spectacular (86%) WINNER

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Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Winston Salem, North Carolina, United States

DatBoi504 (14%)

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Reppin: New Orleans, Louisiana, United States

J~Spectacular

barz coming wit DEM KNOCKOUT-DROPS,homie verse wont even GET-PROPS,put a ''redlight'' on ya rhymes cuz you NEED TO-STOP,coming at barz will get you ''slammed down harder''then any vandle FOUND ON-COPZ...im strapped down READY FOR-COMBAT,homie say he gripping gats??PICTURE THAT,he wouldnt have ''dead aim''on me if aol was SAVING HIS-CHATS...you the guy NOBODY EMBRACES,barz'll leave ya body in FIVE DIFFERENT-PLACES,when i ''grip glockz''like sergeants do ON MILITARY-BASES...this fake gangsta is bout TO GET-EXPOSED,no one on the site respects YOUR RETARTED-FLOWZ,this kid couldnt spit fire if the ''devil was in em'' LIKE EMILY-ROSE...i'll leave this kid wit a BLOODY MURDER-SCENCE,when i load clips shots aimed AT HIS-SLPEEN,thats J~BARZ ROUTINE,homie i done ''shot off'' more kids THEN COLUMBINE-TEENS...J~BARZ BITCH

DatBoi504

I was raised in the ghetto dawg ~born ta be ready~ not like you!i dont need to be braced up ~ta keep steady~and its only been two lines, ~the votes are all mine already~put those braces to some use ~ I still got more, i got plenty~wouldn't wantcha to fall over when im just gettin ready i see you shakin in ya boots, legs like ~strains of spaghettie~and yet im only getting started,... i've been delt the best handleave now i'll let you go with a pardon and ~shake hands~just dont think im going soft,  i can harden on ~command~if i want, I could lap you more then twice... ~UNDERSTAND?????~it dont gotta say it trice it's all ~part of my plan~last time i droped a beat like this... ~that nigga ran!~ .... so mabye you will to!save your breath drop the mic, and hear my best of rthyms ~spill~i kick it freestyle and it's ~all done at will!g

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Battle started: November 11^th 2009 at 14:57
Challenger joined: November 11^th 2009 at 15:17

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2009-11-11 15:17:45).

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scratchthakid Basic Member	I GOT THIS Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:00:24
SpiFFy KiLLz <Ifamouz> Basic Member	Try Audio!!!!! Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:03:18
J~Spectacular Basic Member	to be ranked that high your verse was mad weak fam..no h8 just calling it how i see it..good luck doe Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:19:43
DatBoi504 Basic Member	read it again and this is the first time i came back since a year just because i didnt cap the letters dont meen shit read carefully Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:23:09
coolishkev783 Basic Member	datboi got this i did read it carefully you just gotta make sure u cap it threw text big dawg Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:24:49
J~Spectacular Basic Member	fuck the caps it just wasent hot to me..bt ok Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:25:28
J~Spectacular Basic Member	and homie that voted you 8-53 lol..but you know whats hot right??lmao Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:28:12
DatBoi504 Basic Member	hahaha j Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-11 15:33:14
Unspoken Legend Basic Member	good battle both of ya'll. Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-11 16:26:39
IAmFlow <CLASSICK>	J: concepts were nice, but it was kinda basic n lil creativity to it, so the punch didn't hit as hard as it should, flow n all on point tho.... 'dead aim' line was a nice concept but again because of the basicness of it, it lacked that strong hitting punch... the 'grip glocks' line wasn't a punch, you were saying you grip glocks.. ok!! so does joe schmoe 2, try to stay away from it if its not a directed punch.... 'emily rose' line was prolly your best line, still its basic, but this line hit a lil.. like the 'hot' n 'devil in ya' metaphor n using emily rose as an allusion was pretty nice concept... and the closure was a nice 'concept' n all but again your saying what you did, your not dissing your opponent... its ok to have good lines like that and all but the point of a battle is too punch n thats not punching.. but J you have a lot of nice concepts and a lot of potential, i think if ya wanna improve to work on your complexity and creativity, make the voters think more about it.. add some wordplay n such..and gradually add more complex vocab with your multi's!!...... Datboi: opener.. your multi's n flow are real choppy n the punch wasn't really there.. you gotta have that set up n punch or its not gonna have that hard hitting factor... the 'imagery of shakin legs n strains of spaghetti was pretty nice.. i like that line... the rest was pretty filler n lacking punch.. maybe a flick here n there but it wouldn't hit a gnat.. gotta work on being more direct ar your opponent.. the main thing you lacked is your concepts. you did have one nice line in there tho, so thats a good thing!! overall: both of you just stay up and keep trying to improve.. J had a lot of nice concepts.. dat had too many fillers but did have a nice line in there.. so here my vote!! Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-11 17:01:35
KRAZY G KRUEGER <CGC> Basic Member	DAMN CLOSE BATTLE HAD TAH PICK 1 VB ON MAH BATTES FAIR Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-11 17:08:35
TeXSteiN <SwagLikeUS>	FVc_J_ good concepts in this first line redlight/ flip was good like that it opens the reader eyes ,/next line same good flip n punch / good bid n flip in this , aim/ n chats/next line/after that keep the same heat like emily rose line also+DatBoi_really u had a good flow n jabs here n thurr, nothing really stood out in this , _Fvc_ The fair is In ..... Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-12 23:42:12
OxiJin Basic Member	whut why did people vote for dat boi its not his caps its his crappy rhymes that make him lose-example- "born to be ready""the votes are mine already" so wut u rhymed ready twice good for u lol i would have voted for J on this one Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-13 08:40:36
Elton John Basic Member	no h8 fv......respect it if not send 8... Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-13 10:14:49
Elton John Basic Member	REAL TALK J COOLISHKEV AND DATBOI IS TRADING VOTEZ...NUFF SAID..... Voted: J~Spectacular / DatBoi504 Posted on: 2009-11-13 10:15:55
J~Spectacular Basic Member	thats a fucking shame^^..thanks 4 the info fam Comment Only Posted on: 2009-11-13 11:02:39


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