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Length: 8 Lines

Z-Shirelli (38%)

Basic Member

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Los Angeles, California, United States

kCrooked_Lyrics is on FIRE! 10+ wins in a row!

kCrooked_Lyrics (62%) WINNER

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Reppin: Worthington, Minnesota, United States

Z-Shirelli

I am the national PROTECTOR, and the fucking coffin COLLECTOR, hip hop's personal flow INSPECTOR. The killer like hannibal LECTOR, a killers instict INJECTOR, Hip hop cant be taught can only INSPIRES, look up to me, Cause im the one who slashes TIRES, the guy who chokes sluts with barbed WIRES, The man who sets public shcools on FIRES,The flow is sweet kinda like DREYERS  I mean what I say other people are LIARS.  I can be quick like BRUCE LEE, Burn this fucking world down, SEE? Cause if I die, everyone is coming with ME. Im so fast they call me SWIFTY. Maybe cuz i kill QUICKLY. That fact was made POORLY. I like to kill SLOWLY. I tell sluts to blow ME, cuz my dick is ITCHY. The Phantom versus the WORLD. The fight is about to UNFURL, Just me noone else no PLURAL, must be something wrong with the NEURAL(brain).

kCrooked_Lyrics

yo gurl gave me the CLEAVLAND-hello-STEAMER,im the type to go DEEP so call her a WIDE-RECIEVER she also CREEP wit my FELLOW-TEAMERS,she like a BUG-in-the-RUG and im the CARPET-CLEANER,she love SUCKINg-on-my-BOTTLE so i think u need to WEEN-HIM i MEAN-HER,OOPS sry fo my MISPRONOUNCEd-TEXT i got her MISTAKEN wit yo MR-SLOW-DOWN-REDNECK-EX i bet u wana THROW-DOWN-NEXT cuz everyone EXPECTS rapper HEAT now they no u bought a DUDE-OFF-THE-STREET and paid him wit HO-DOWN-CHECKS so u must CONFESS im BLESSED wit fire and READY u cant SEE-MURKY i tear FLESH-off-ur-TEXT like i was the YETI and u had BEEF-JURKY my rap FRAGILE-BUT-PURKY like yo gurls titys she SLAP-WILD at her JOB so i let her WORK-ME i CRACK-a-SMILE while i go fishing in her wit my ROD like i worked at BERKLEYS(a fishing store)i CRAP-TABS i so-good but she MURKED-ME and im now MISUNDERSTOOD cuz she gave me CRABS

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Battle started: September 6^th 2009 at 00:58
Challenger joined: September 6^th 2009 at 01:37

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2009-09-06 01:37:37).

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Z-Shirelli Basic Member	I focused more on my flow Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:27:26
king of the smile Basic Member	fv no h8 Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:40:03
ROONY MOUSE Basic Member	Amzing battle Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:42:07
LAV <LG> Exclusive Member	more illustrative i think Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:43:28
Prince Z Basic Member	i like the flow for Z's Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:45:01
Z-Shirelli Basic Member	yo great battle kcrooked Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:48:32
kCrooked_Lyrics Basic Member	hell ya z raw deal Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 01:49:36
ZeOn	fv vbf on ma recents Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 03:04:59
king of the smile Basic Member	How about you vote it back lyrics Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 03:05:42
kCrooked_Lyrics Basic Member	ight homie Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 03:06:24
L3thAL-MiC <BSA420> Basic Member	GB VBF!! Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 03:31:32
~FEEBLE BITER~ <Deadliest> Basic Member	fv n8 vote back fair on battles Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 07:44:45
Killer Cole	fv.. vb! Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 08:28:01
free-rhymes <PHYSCOPATH> Basic Member	use both did goog but i gotta hand it to........ Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 10:00:33
Vulgar Basic Member	Phantom: First line had a good concept, potential to be a good punch but the execution to your concept was all wrong, it wasn't a punch at all then, 2nd line, Had shitty Vocab and grammar, good flow, but shit metaphors with a played concept and no punch, Line 3, Seemed like a filler to me, 4th line was plain shitty, 5th line matched the 4th line(lol) the 6th line had a really good concept and was a really good line, but not for a battle, Overall: I'd work on my concepts and punches if I were you, Don't start writing unless you have a few concepts already in mind, Mid. 5 ... kCrooked: First line was overly played, The whole "Girl" shit the whole "I fucked your Girl" Shit is played, the punch and concept were both played, you had some broken multies and scattered flow, 2nd line had all the multies on point, but it was like one big filler to me, no real punch and a shit concept, good flow this time, 3rd line was good flowing but that was it, tons of broken multies, played concept, played punch, get off the shit about his girl. 5th line, you finally got off the concept but the one you switched to wasn't much better, it was a really shitty concept and a weak punch, 6th line, Shitty line, shouldn't have used it to close your verse, liike shiit not really that good, Overall: You also have to work on your punches and concepts, you won't win many battles if you don't, Overall: Mid 5 Battle Overall: 5-5 Not a bad battle, but not a good one either, both have major work to do before they can become the titans on this site, I will give this one to phantom, he had the better concepts and punches, Fair is in, If your gonna hate, don't return it, if not, return it. Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-06 10:25:05
Z-Shirelli Basic Member	yo thanks for the advice Vulgar. and for the vote Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 15:54:04
Prince Z Basic Member	great battle all in all Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-06 17:52:19
Prince Z Basic Member	i agree with vulgar Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 00:55:40
MopeyDopey Basic Member	yo z teach me Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 01:58:54
MopeyDopey Basic Member	much respect Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 01:59:19
MopeyDopey Basic Member	mmhm Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 01:59:48
Challenger Basic Member	votes are always honest voted vote back ch-ch-challenger Voted: Z-Shirelli / kCrooked_Lyrics Posted on: 2009-09-07 10:57:30
MopeyDopey Basic Member	both good Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 17:10:10
Prince Z Basic Member	thats what i think Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 17:17:18
MopeyDopey Basic Member	what the fuck. it wont let me vote Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 17:21:30
Prince Z Basic Member	thats wat i think Comment Only Posted on: 2009-09-07 17:43:15


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