ezzz... FV no hate Voted: bostonjay1 / _Swag
Posted on: 2009-08-08 18:16:11

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Posted on: 2009-08-08 18:19:21

Bostonjay1: MEET THA DIRECTOR OF PAIN IN THA HOUSE OF PAIN watch your step CAUSE your BLOOD IS LEAKIN tha DEMONS IS CREEPIN LICKIN THERE CHOPS they just might snatch a RIB AND PUNCH U IN YOUR HEART THEN DRAG YOUR BODY TO THA KITCHEN This is an okay punch, could have been suteup with some metas or some wordplay to make it a bit nicer though. THA BUTCHER IS IN PROSITION TO START RIPIN and tha hungery ones TEETH is GRINDIN so i give em tha ok and i let them dine in then . I DIVE IN EAT YOUR HEART & SMASH YOUR BRAINS in THEN WE GIVE YOUR REMINDS TO RATS AND THINGS THAT lurks tha halls of THE HOUSE OF PAIN Flow was a little weird here, but decent concept. so DONT TRY BOSTON JAY because i open tha house and CUT EVERY ORGAN yeah torture at its finest fuck tha last two lines u gon need them to match this rhyem beat your head in like they did that monkey on rotton.com so u BETTER BE CLAM AND WRITE ABOUT HOW IM THA BEST TEXT GOD Always finish your verse with a punch, not an up on yourself, but this was okay. _Swag: This Game Is Like A Shooter Cuz I BLAST ALL PLAYERS, Don’t Fuck With Me Cuz Ma CLASS ALL SLAYERS I Grew Up On Some Wutang, You Grew Up On Shit Like ASSHOLE HAIR! Lol this wasnt a particulary clever punch but it made me laugh , so definite props for that. Im The Typa Nigga That SCRIPT THE VERSES Which Leave You HIT AND WORTHLESS My Rhymes Larger Than The WIDTH OF EARTH IS You Think You Hot? You-Lying I Leave This Dude-Crying Like How KIDS AT BIRTH IS! This is real decent here, excellent punch and real nice delivery. Ya Face Is Gone And The RIBS IS WORST HIT I Slay-ya-Verse You'll Know I Play-my-Words When My Eagles Leave These KIDS 'DESERTED'! Wow this was impressive, i understood this concept right away, most of the time cats will fuck up this concept, but you did it real nice here. Ya FLOW FUCKED, WE BORED Fuck Balls You Have NO GUTS FOR A G BRAWL Your The Next-I-Hit I'll Show Ya Ma Text-Is-Sick When I THROW UP ON MY KEYBOARD! Nah, not feeling this at all, this concept is hella played. I Dono Why You Would Wanna FACE ME My Flow-Stings You Get No-Win(d)s Like How SPACE BE! Decent concept but i think this is not good for a closer. One of your other bars would have been more appropriate to close on. But all around solid verse. Bostonjay1: i think you probably just spit this right off your head which its pretty good at that, but take some time and setup up your punches a little better and the rest of your verse will fall right into place. _Swag: not much i can critique on your verse here, all around solid drop here. Respect to both. Fair's in. Voted: bostonjay1 / _Swag
Posted on: 2009-08-08 18:45:56

Vote back fairly on my battle with Antidote. Peace brothers. Voted: bostonjay1 / _Swag
Posted on: 2009-08-08 18:46:24

good battle....fv vb Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-08-08 18:55:32

yeah i can respect your vote because u took time to break it down and i was just at tha hospital visiting my baby and i decide to come up with something quick it didnt have strcuture because my naggin ass girl was steady in my ear lol but as soon sa i can grt time then u will more out of boston thank for tha fair vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-08-08 19:19:17

shit i was texting to fasted lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-08-08 19:21:42

DAM SWAG WHY U DO THAT NIGGA LIKE THAT YO VB I GOT A BATTLE OUT Voted: bostonjay1 / _Swag
Posted on: 2009-08-08 20:05:09

VB Voted: bostonjay1 / _Swag
Posted on: 2009-08-10 16:36:59

all dickriders send me beef lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-08-10 16:49:55