ur sick nigga damn Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 14:24:45

still aint nobody took it? guess thats a sign.. imma take it lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 15:24:03

good battle dude.. much respect. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 15:46:54

'piece of cake like wedding dinners'...played out but styll orginial Voted: Rythmus / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-17 15:59:30

Good response, A. Much respect. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 16:25:49

Here to drop the fair one. Rythmus: "fuck off, or i'm PULLIN' THE FOURS to send 6 at your MULLET FOR SURE/ this kid's the ULTIMATE WHORE/ i'm a SULTAN AND MORE/ got "cash", only way this kid "posts up" and gets "paper" is a BULLETIN BOARD!/" - took you a little while to get to the punch but once you got there it hit hard and was both creative and clever. "i'll HARM OCK and MAR OCK in DARK SPOTS with LARGE GLOCKS/ when i shoot, your HEART STOP and give you an "abrupt 'wake'" like ALARM CLOCKS!" - this was pretty clever as well. No need to explain the "wake" wordplay. "i'm SWIFT AND SICK, QUICK TO "CLICK" and "light" dudes, bullets? call 'em "BICS" FOR PRICKS/ and all that "crack" talk? FIBS AGAIN/ dude couldn't push "rock" if he was SISSYPHUS!/" - I'm gonna have to google "Sissyphus" and if I have to google a punch, then that means it wasn't effective to the rest of the crowd either. Dig? Go for the quick strikes and punch a mutha fuckas lights out. "oh, what, OVER YOUR HEAD?/ the rhymes maybe... the bullets? GO TO THE "HEAD" like they wanna get "BLOWED", BUT INSTEAD/ you're the one that gets "BLOWED" IN THE END" - na, too much repetition with the rhyme scheme and no real punch here. "and then ya'll will *know* dude's a bitch... it gets his "lips" TOTALLY "WET"! (think)/ it's either that, "or gas 'im", and i DON'T MEAN THE BEST comPONENT OF SEX" - decent, but not one of your better punches in the battle. A-OK: "Ain't nothin' to me homie imma BRING BLOODSHED.. and fuckin' RING YA NECK he thinks he's 'king? i'll dethrone em' like KING TUTS DEATH!!" - this needed a better setup. Cool concept though but the punch fell a bit short. "Your shit was good homie but DAMN.. SADLY DIDN'T PROSPER.. Fuck with me? I'll 'use 12 rounds' like a CHAMPIONSHIP BOXER!! Dude just CAN'T MATCH IT when I LAND HATCHETS.. he is 'weavin the heat' like he's goin to hell in a HAND BASKET!!" - lol, I liked this line. Was real solid. "Imma have ya RAPS FA LUNCH OR, STAB YA CUNT SORE 'put a fork in em' cuz this LAD IS DONE FOR!! All hope is GONE! FEAR? BETTER! your 'text is saddening' like JOHN DEERE LETTERS!!" - na, this was worded wrong. It's "Dear John" letters. "His face be RED N' BITTER and LET EM' FIGURE.. this shits a 'piece of cake' like WEDDING DINNERS!! It's easier SAID THAN DONE but I'll turn ya HEAD TO NUMB the REST IS DONE.. your BEST IS UMM..? LESS THAN TOUGH!!!" - the wedding cake line was pretty decent but the closer wasn't all that bro. Your opener and closer should be the strongest parts of your verse (ideally). In the end this was hella close and while A-OK had the best punch in the battle, Rythmus was a little bit more sensible. Still, A had a few more overall punches than Rythmus so that's where my vote goes in a close one. Respect it and return the fair on my battle with Miraculous. Voted: Rythmus / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-17 17:12:49

haha i feel like a damn fool. john deere letters.. wtf am i thinkin? lmao Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 17:16:24

OK BATTLE Voted: Rythmus / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-17 18:03:31

Sissyphus was the cat in Greek mythology who was damned to the punishment of pushing a boulder up a hill for the rest of eternity. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 20:53:56

haha good battle, i was really digging 2 lines. got my fair vote in 100! Voted: Rythmus / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-20 15:21:39

borrrring Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-20 15:41:36