Yo, Sparta, if i were u, i wud run while given the 'CHANCE', understand i 'adVANCE', with more Clips than my 'FANS', Protect ya 'NECK', coz its under the 'THREAT', of bein 'GASHED OPEN', Death is near coz ur 'CASKET OPEN', Run up on me, N ill 'BLAST-OPEN', 'FIRE' like when i 'SPIT', Never TIRE like when im Fuckin the 'CLITS', ill let u know the 'BACK' of my 'HAND' 'BETTER', better duck when i CLAP the BERETTA, aint no-one 'BETTER', than me to do the Job, Im a Hitman that will 'ELIMINATE ya SQUAD', u better 'EVACUATE when i come close n dont 'STOP', Pumpin more Gas than an 'AEROSOL-CAN', arent u part of that 'CLEARISIL-GANG'? ...Allright Decent Ryhmes Here. Only Real punch was the Aerosol Can. Not Bad. The Other Line were as same. There wasnt any punches that stood but OK Verse Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 00:10:35

I saw you re-used a couple lines from the Wall of Fame. So KOS Had A Punch Atleast In Every Punch. So I think He Edged it Overcoming Xiaolin's Lines. Peace Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 00:12:11

Expo: [Multis] KOS [Punches] KOS [Flow] None. [LX Quotables] Not Really Any For Me Fam. [KOS Quotables] I put the *Steel to this Pussy* like he's "CHECKED IN FOR A PAP SMEAR"!! I'll even *Fold ya Spine Forward* till you're "Givin BRAIN TO YOURSELF" don't mean *Showin Love for Britney* when I'm "PLACIN *SPEARS IN YOUR HEART*"!!~ ...You're HARMLESS THEN YOU ROCK A MIC? This SPARTAN ENDS YOUR TALK FOR LIFE cuz you've got *Less Punches in this Bout* then "ARMLESS MEN IN BOXING FIGHTS"!!~ I'll smash his -FACE WITH *BAGS OF QUARTERS*- and "KNOCK SOME *SENSE* INTO HIS HEAD"!! but it's like "Tic Tac Toe for One" the way that "(X) IS LACKIN THE (O)HHH'S!! . Good Battle Here Respect The Vote 'Fair Tossed' Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 00:16:26

ok i only drop fairness and your both my boys but KOS got this now for the expo.....KOS had some great multies n concepts als had some cool punches but tey had alot of punches....punches in bunches win battles....now LX you had some cool concepts, but everything was to basic, you need multies it creates flow and structure, but anyway you did have some cool concepts in there but you need to get a lil complex, like KOS had alot of complexity when it came to developing punches and stufff.. but overall its a mid 9 KOS to mid 8 in LX....fair tossed vb 1 no h8 Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 00:19:17

Lyrical wasn't near as complex in his drop but was rather randon in concepts he stressed. Which was good...somethin new againt Sparta LOL. But he's still the king. Fairest votes. No apologies. Just condolences for all the lives that SPARTA HAS TAKEN. Peace Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 01:02:58

I liked lines from both of you. Pretty good battle. Avatar line from sparta was sick. haha Sparta filled up his bars and had a lot more substance. fv is in. Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 01:18:14

FVC: LX, You're still trying to rhyme words that don't actually rhyme with the bar bro. Clearisil Gang, and Aerosol Can?, Where the hell is the rhyme in that bro?, It seems like you're trying to force your shit way too much and it's fucking up your verse. Again, I know I've told you and other people have told you, Use multies in your raps, and not shit that doesn't rhyme. That one syllable or one word punch shit works great in audios, but text battles are a whole different beast. You need to work a little bit more bro, you were lacking punches as well. Sparta, good shit all the way through bro, you were consistent in your punches and flow. Didn't have to read anything twice to figure out what you were trying to say. I like the ending about the "X" is lackin the "O'S", good nameplay right there. You provided good imagery in your battle along with the multies and the punches packed pretty decent power. One of the best ones I've seen you throw down brother. 7-10. Fair vote is in. Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 01:35:15

good upping LX. you just went up against a titan doe!.lolz. fv's in vb fairly! Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 04:23:58

LYRICAL: not bad stuff here. verse seemed pretty simple and the omission of some multis became glaring at some points. i see you are trying a new structure. in my opinion, your old style was better. this is too choppy and fails to make a strong connection. i couldnt really point to any punches that hit hard. work on adding some complexity to your concepts and you'll be fine. KOS: this was pretty tame by your standards of brutality...yet still brutal. my fav line was the Brittany Spears shit..it seemed like something so simple, but you freaked it into something dope. some solid punches. Closer was tough too...Overall this was a lil lopsided, but could've been worse. Good shit. THIS VOTE IS F.V.C. SANCTIONED Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 09:49:04

fv Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 10:32:32

The opener and closer on KOS killed it. Plus some good lines in the middle. Nice verse by both but im giving the win to punches plain and simple. Thats how it goes. Multies need some work and more complexity in Lyricals verse. VBF on my battle with Lizman...hotlister waiting to be hotlisted. Give it a peep and drop a fair one. Peace. Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 11:14:05

uppp Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 11:57:51

yo....both..were..do pe..but...the...whol e''put..the..steel.. .to..this..pussy,lik e..he's..checked..fo r..a..pap..smeer''wo n..me Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 15:23:01

good battle Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 16:32:07

In my opinion this doesn't belong on the hotlist. It might... but only because KoS's verse carried it there. Monosyllabic rhyme, no wordplay... LX's verse looks like it came out of the 80s. No hate here, man, I just think this is too basic. Especially against a cat like Sparta. On the real though, Sparta's last line alone could've won this battle. Fair. Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 17:49:11

fv Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 20:29:35

Since you STEPPED IN FOR THE LAST QUEER I'll be teachin LESSONS WITH THE RAPS HERE when I put the *Steel to this Pussy* like he's "CHECKED IN FOR A PAP SMEAR"!!~---Nice opener.. you'll get FAME WHEN YOUR DEALT as I'm MAIMIN YOUR HEALTH I'll even *Fold ya Spine Forward* till you're "Givin BRAIN TO YOURSELF"!!~ ....sikkk line....you've got *Less Punches in this Bout* then "ARMLESS MEN IN BOXING FIGHTS"!!~....LMFAO. ....but it's like "Tic Tac Toe for One" the way that "(X) IS LACKIN THE (O)HHH'S!!----Good closing line.....KOS gets this in my mind..he was just more complex and creative.....tho Lyrical had a steadyness to his ish...he lacked in the Complexity...try workin on multies a bit more fam----but DONT just focus on multies and forget the punches n shit....-----im droppin this ish a fair...Holla!!!!!!!! !!! Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-14 23:36:18

gewd Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-15 00:25:39

v.b Voted: A Certain Swag / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-15 10:25:10