sumbody good get at it! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-13 01:06:47

Ill...Opener was played...GhostWriter = A Ghost who writes AKA your gonna kill him, and he still gonna rap. Punch is alright, played to shit though Your second line, Played ish, Saddam shit is getting old, but i've never heard sumthin like that bout him... good line, but...BATTLE REAL Best Get SATTLED REAL Cuz the FOR-HITTING When I Roll With MORE-BISCUITS then KFC VALUE MEALS!!!// line was played, once again, like shiit you had some dope lines, but when they weren't dope, they were played. WELL HERE I WET POUNDS this NOOB-CHOKED and you Know a DUDE-BROKE When his WELFARE CHECK BOUNCE!!!//...One of those Dope lines I was tellin yah about, lol, Just gotta get all that played shit outta yah head, more dope, fresh lines. Overall: It was a nice verse, VERY low 8...L: RUBBA STRAPPED, BUST ANOTHA GAT...shit was broken, Punch wasn't played, it didn't hit hard, and it was broken, nice flow to it as well, Concept was Whack, and brought your punch down lol. The bubble Wrap line was fucking played to shit, I see it everywhere man, better multies, kinda broken still though...The next line (Extra Clips line) was a nice punch, would've been nicer if you chose better wording, fuck man, shit was dope, could've been alot better, I didn't get the Hyphy songs line, so I won't count it. Box of Pizza line was kinda played, liked how you executed it, had punches leading up to the final punch, but still had alot of broken multies...Overall: Work on yah multies lol. VERY high 7...Battle Overall: 8-7 Ill, just work on those played punches, L, work on yah multies, and you guys will be top spitters in no time FV VB on my Latest. Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 01:46:14

ILL NEX got that no h8 vb Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 02:27:13

ill-nex shit was fuckin fire.....but L was a lil bit more understandable. no hate votes!...all fair. Vote fair on my battle against Chronic Punch plz. Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 02:43:28

both is sick as hell.. fair vote is in.. if ya got a min.. hit up my txt battle.. I hardly ever do txt.. ~1 Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 04:19:33

ill nexus really came close wit da nice punches but overall L had better connectin wit da flow nd connected his punches better nd dat is y he gets da W. fv no h8 VB! Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 05:53:38

GB Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 05:54:46

this shouldnt be on the hot list.. lmao.. and the fact that its 1 on hot list is jus stupid.. this verse took me like 3 mnutes at most.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-13 07:18:46

IllNexus,Took It,No H8 But His Flow/Verse Was all Round Better..I Always Vote fair n honest So....Vb fair n honest peace Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 10:19:33

FV NEVA H8 VBF Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 17:34:44

vote is in Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-13 19:05:36

Swag Edged It A Lil Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-14 00:50:59

1 jus edged a lil Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-14 09:30:23

if ya want a expo just pm me Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-14 11:16:36

sdadad yeaaaaaa Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-14 11:53:45

How tha fukk am I losing this??! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-14 20:50:54

Good shit Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-14 22:02:09

Alright, fair one was requested so here it is. Nexus: "Man Id Hate to TOAST BITERS But Ill ROAST WRITE UPS CAPS-HIT and BACKS-SPLIT Make Him a GHOSTWRITER!//" - na man, not really feeling this as an opener. "BOMBING HIS FLOW and STOPPING HIS DOUGH Hell be Found Underground With Slugs Like SADDAM AND HIS HOLE!//" - this was pretty dope although now that Saddam is dead its kinda yesterday's news ya dig? "I Got FLOW WITH NO PREVENTION I Got WAR-BOYS With MORE-TOYS Than a G.I. JOE CONVENTION!!!/" - pretty decent punch here actually. Not bad. Best one of your battle so far. "Cap Make Em PAIRAWETT HILARIOUS Leave His Blood and the Tubman Like Doing HEROINE WITH HARRIET!//" - I don't get it fam and I'm pretty intelligent cat so this one is just, naa. "Nice TRY THOUGH LIKE LOTTOS but I Jack your Car and Drop your Insurance Rate More than GEICO!/" - good concept but needed a slightly different flip to it. Insurance rate part was what was off. " BATTLE REAL Best Get SATTLED REAL Cuz the FOR-HITTING When I Roll With MORE-BISCUITS then KFC VALUE MEALS!!!//" - funny, but this was more swag and uppin yourself than it was a punch against your opponent. "WELL HERE I WET POUNDS this NOOB-CHOKED and you Know a DUDE-BROKE When his WELFARE CHECK BOUNCE" - funny punch, pretty nice. "Yea I GOT RICHES and CLAP SIXES Roll and Just BRAT SNITCHES Cuz he Always at the Bottom of the Pile Like FAT BITCHES!!!!" - pretty nice closer here actually. Not bad fam. Here is your L: "I keep a RUBBA STRAPPED, fo i have tah BUST ANOTHA GAT u take em all, i think u would LOVE THE CAPS!!!!!" - almost a personal but needed to be tightened up a bit on the flip. "fa reals, ur girl? we 'havin a ball' if she come around ill 'pass her the ball' something like a RUNNIN BACK!!!! boi why u even TOUCHIN RAPS!!!!! his shit is commen, u couldnt get it poppin standin on sum BUBBLE WRAP!" - this was all sick material here with good concepts and solid punches. "ima DECK THIS BITCH if u knew who u were MESSIN WIT... EXTENDED to to SEMI or we holdin EXTRA CLIPS!!! if i got 'glocks or sum tres' and we 'pop em in place' put 'dots on his face' but we aint on no FRECKLE SHIT!!" - lol, nice punch. Not a big fan of the gunplay but this was still a hella nice punch. "if u dont LIKE ME WRONG you are NICELY GONE!! 'move bitch' 'two clips' if the fuckin PIPE BE ON!!!(BITCH!) if im 'dumpin gunz' to 'gun em up' ill shoot the shotty. to 'pump em up' like some HYPHY SONGS!!!" - this was just decent. Not feeling it as much as the rest of your verse though. "if I AM FEATURED fa RHYMES TO BEATCHA!!! ILL DELETE YA!!!! if i pull it have u catchin bullets no WIDE RECIEVERS! Leave OCK IN BLEACHAS.. MAGNUM WILL POOR, Ill STAND BY UR DOOR, Lyk I Had BOX OF PIZZA!" - humorous and hard hitting. Solid closer. Sorry Nexus but L got this one. Respect it and return the fair one on my battle with DizzDaDogg (hotlist). Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-14 22:03:14

Aight this is how its done, drop me a fair one back. ILL NEXUS: Man Id Hate to TOAST BITERS But Ill ROAST WRITE UPS CAPS-HIT and BACKS-SPLIT Make Him a GHOSTWRITER!// Not bad, seen this too many times though. BOMBING HIS FLOW and STOPPING HIS DOUGH Hell be Found Underground With Slugs Like SADDAM AND HIS HOLE!// Another decent punch, and good build up. I Got FLOW WITH NO PREVENTION I Got WAR-BOYS With MORE-TOYS Than a G.I. JOE CONVENTION!!!// Haha i was diggin this one. Cap Make Em PAIRAWETT HILARIOUS Leave His Blood and the Tubman Like Doing HEROINE WITH HARRIET!// This aight, but not impressed. Nice TRY THOUGH LIKE LOTTOS but I Jack your Car and Drop your Insurance Rate More than GEICO!// I think i see what you mean, but the real punch that you said was your gunna drop their insurance rate, which isnt exactly the hardest hitting punch lol. This probably could have worked if it was a little better structured or flipped entirely. I BATTLE REAL Best Get SATTLED REAL Cuz the FOR-HITTING When I Roll With MORE-BISCUITS then KFC VALUE MEALS!!!// Lol, i liked this. Not particularly hard hitting but it made me laugh and it was kinda clever. WELL HERE I WET POUNDS this NOOB-CHOKED and you Know a DUDE-BROKE When his WELFARE CHECK BOUNCE!!!// Nah, wasnt feeling this one, good structure, but wasnt feelin the punch. Yea I GOT RICHES and CLAP SIXES Roll and Just BRAT SNITCHES Cuz he Always at the Bottom of the Pile Like FAT BITCHES!!!! Nah man, this aint good enough for a closer, need something better here. Here Is Your L: I keep a RUBBA STRAPPED, fo i have tah BUST ANOTHA GAT u take em all, i think u would LOVE THE CAPS!!!!! Not a hard hitting punch at all. I see the concept but it shoulda been flipped into a meta. fa reals, ur girl? we 'havin a ball' if she come around ill 'pass her the ball' something like a RUNNIN BACK!!!! This aight, but again a little more build up would have made it funnier. boi why u even TOUCHIN RAPS!!!!! his shit is commen, u couldnt get it poppin standin on sum BUBBLE WRAP! Lol, this isnt a real hard hitter but a good punch regardless. Gotta respect the wordplay. ima DECK THIS BITCH if u knew who u were MESSIN WIT... EXTENDED to to SEMI or we holdin EXTRA CLIPS!!! This aint really a punch, shoulda kept it rolling into your next bar because its a better punch there. if i got 'glocks or sum tres' and we 'pop em in place' put 'dots on his face' but we aint on no FRECKLE SHIT!! This is a decent wordplay but not a hard hitter. Good punch regardless. if u dont LIKE ME WRONG you are NICELY GONE!! 'move bitch' 'two clips' if the fuckin PIPE BE ON!!!(BITCH!) Not feelin it. if im 'dumpin gunz' to 'gun em up' ill shoot the shotty. to 'pump em up' like some HYPHY SONGS!!!(WOW!) This aight. if I AM FEATURED fa RHYMES TO BEATCHA!!! ILL DELETE YA!!!! if i pull it have u catchin bullets no WIDE RECIEVERS! Leave OCK IN BLEACHAS.. MAGNUM WILL POOR, Ill STAND BY UR DOOR, Lyk I Had BOX OF PIZZA! Decent concept and okay punch, but i dont know if its worthy of a closer bar. All in all, both came hot, and my vote going to punches. Flow goes to Here is your L, punches to Ill Nexus. Probably could have edged it if you filled out your lines. Fairs in. Peace. Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-15 07:14:47

Drop me a fair one back on my battle with Lizman, waiting to be hotlisted. Vote back brothers. Peace. Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-15 07:20:16

attack of the kitty. Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-15 13:51:51

Fair Voters Club: ILL, your opener was played, as Boreas said .. your multies are broken and some didn't even rhyme bruh, no hate but you gotta get that fixed up .. your flow was good, choppy though .. your punchlines were original ..drop some wordplay/harder hitting personals bruh .. you talkin bout dropping a cars insurance more than geico .. talkin bout walfare cheques, you gotta be dissin your opponent fam .. take my advice, or not ....... L, your opener was nice, made sense .. lolol, your punches were landed from all angles, no wordplay .. i seen some metaphores though .. your flow was good, on-point multies .. nothing really to be fixed.. jus try getting some more humour and you be droppin shit like ma boy Mayneak, stay up yall .. dropped the fair, respect it.. be eZ Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-15 14:48:19

FAIR VOTER CLUB: i felt like wat L said was right dis battle should't be on tha hotlister "but" i'ma respect that it is..... ILL NeXus i felt you came hard at parts but some of tha material wasn't original there were also not alot but parts were tha multi's were broken but you had some nice punches some hit harder than others and you had ah decent structure and ya seag was a lil off but it was ah good read.....HERE is Your L some played concepts but there was a few creative points in tha spit and tha gun talk was ah lil over used but it connected ya flow was decent not ya hardest by any means but you did say you wrote it in 3 minutes and its too many !!!!!! marks that kinda throws off tha structure.....I'ma keep dis concealed for swaying but you gys should get better!!!!! .::DNA::. Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-15 22:52:36

ILL NEXUS GOT IT Voted: ILL NeXus / Here Is Your L
Posted on: 2009-07-26 06:00:18