Expo: The opener.. Robert Deniro died in the movie "Heat" hence, Kill A Rob. Good battle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-13 00:13:44

good but killa got it.. Voted: Killa Rob / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-13 01:30:17

gb fv no h8 vb Voted: Killa Rob / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-13 02:22:24

good battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-13 11:49:25

>>>>RIGHTEOUS Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-13 20:38:52

yeah gb Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-14 15:16:55

Here's how it is. KillaRob: "im QUICK TO SHOOT and ill "LESSEN YA ROOF", that means "ya hard top" WILL TURN INTO A CONVERTABLE!!// " - some good concepts in here but they needed to flipped slightly better to improve the punch. Also...where is your rhyme scheme? "I GOT LONG SLEVES, "jumpin outta tress "LIKE "VIETNAMESE COVERED IN LEAVES", i got an army full of termites, hit you and youll turn right, "destroy ya damn nerve sight" NOW YA CANT SEE//" - rhyme scheme was better here and some of the concepts were cool but once again the punch fell just a little bit short. "i surrounded with A WEED SENT when i RUN UP IN YA RESIDENT, even when you stop shootin my "troops still be at war" you'll think "BUSH WAS STILL PRESIDENT"!!!//" this was better here in terms of tying everything together. "fuck talkin NIGGAZ WILL BE DEAD, cause ill "clap that toast" IF YOU FUCK "WITH MY BREAD"// money hungry SO A NIGGA NEVA FULL, hit em high to "make him fly" YOU'LL THINK HE ADVERTISING RED BULL!!//" - punch in the second line was fairly dope actually. Nice job. Multis are hella off though so hit me up if you need tips or advice. "lil nigga I WILL HURT YOU, when its danger we "run to the shells" LIKE A FAMILY OF TURTLES!//ill raise that heater JUST TO DELEATE YA, cause "after beef" i "get to the cheese" LIKE A PEPPERONI PIZZA!!!//" - two pretty decent punches although the second one could be misinterpreted by some to mean that YOUR verse is cheese, dig? A-OK: "You ain't gettin stacks you get a BILL AND SOB!(broke) I wouldn't have to bring "heat" to KILL A ROB(Killa Rob) Beatin' me homie thats a HOPELESS FANTASY.. I'd be better off tryna cut your dead weight CHOKIN A MANATEE!! " - pretty solid and with good multis to end in some decent punches with good setups. Nice opener. "I'm comin with RAPS TO HURT YOU! Fact is I "spray harder" than a fuckin' AXE COMMERCIAL! I swear.. I try to be nice but I just LACK IN VIRTUE.. You seem pretty soft I might as well let a FAGGOT MERK YOU!!" - first punch was dope, second one not so much. "Your verses couldn't be "nasty" AIDS INFESTED! You couldn't "cross a line" if you just MADE X'S! Tryna pick up women with shitty jokes like.. SEVEN ATE NINE, AND stop tryna live lavish off of EVERYDAY FINANCE!!" - two knowledge punches that were both intelligent. Nice switchup. "If you wanted to pick somethin to brag about.. WHY PAPER? I'm just on higher levels like windows in SKY SCRAPERS! I'll leave you IN THE DIRT SHIT, how could you try to bend something so PICTURE PERFECT?" - rhyme scheme was slightly awkward because of too many words between rhymes but the sky scrapers punch was pretty solid. Overall, A-OK got this one. Good battle though. 9's are the highest I give on 8 liners, so this is a 9-8 battle. Vote back fair on my hotlister with DizzDaDogg. Respect brothers. Voted: Killa Rob / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-14 22:38:25

^^^i respect your vote...no h8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-14 22:58:26