staten. and brooklen. berros. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:04:00

ill take it.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:04:40

explain em Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:06:18

BTW: FiiNiiSH HiiM Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:06:35

aye we gotta get a battle poppin within 24 hours daddy.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:10:29

sorry for the delay on the drop, computer was messin up. good battle though. at least i think so... Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:20:57

GUD SHY BUHT KILL GOT IT IM NOT EVEN GON HATE R FRONT HIS PUNCHES N CREATIVITY WAS BETTA GB DOE FV NEVA H8 VBF Voted: GAtEZAhVElLi-P / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:29:17

not bad Voted: GAtEZAhVElLi-P / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-12 17:44:17

Alright this is how KOS does so respect it. Killyahself: "STOP N SPA WIT so bombs? ill DROP N BOMB QUICK! how can he 'handle me' when i put 'EIGHTS TA HANDS'? autillery? worried? you can come planning to steal/ steel but if you decide to 'TAKE A STAND' youll go to jail its COMMON KNOWLEDGE!" - be careful with A BB A multi schemes because if there are too many words between A1 and A2 then it makes your flow almost impossible to follow, dig? Also, not much going on here but multis. Don't ever forget that punches win battles bro. "excape? COLD NINES WIT HOLSTER! why you bringin them OLD LINES TA BOAST HUH? jagged punches no wonder how you 'MISSED ME' and to the readers? after the first line you can tell i got this 'WINFREY/ WIN FREE' like i deciced to CO SIGN WIT OPRAH!" - Nice fam. This bar here was dope. The wordplay set up a nice punch and the multis were a little closer together. I'd still probably tighten it a little bit for the sake of flow though. "trys to excell his flow ova SNAPPY BEATS but its off key and thats TRASHY B! and mines? raid! like a 'SEIGE KID' so for that?.. i 'PEINGUINS/ PING WINS' quicker that the flock from HAPPY FEET!," - not bad here. Pretty clever on the wordplay again but the punch wasn't quite as good as in the last bar. Still a solid bar though but watch the A BB A placing bro. "so my 'staten/ stat ten' like a THING FOR BROKLYN! hile yours lost.. BRING TEAMS FA LOOKIN! your? resembles a pellet mines? 'GAUGE MAN' its fucin 'MAYHEM/ MAY HAM' like one of th mods had a THIG FER COOKIN" - watch your spelling bro. I know that's a small thing but its text so its gotta be laid out proper as best as possible. Not a bad closer and overall not a bad verse. A-OK: "I operate like a grenade just TAKE PEN AND PULL I SAY SHIT IN FULL and MAKE SINNIN' COOL.. you? just worship FAKE CRIMINALS!!" - this was a pretty straight opener with a good personal. Multis were fine as well. Good stuff. "I dont give a fuck please do HOLD YA TOY cause I can beat anything that looks like its swagga jacked from SOULJA BOY!!(shitty) He finna be DANCIN' NEXT! Smell RANCID? YES! You gotta be a MAN TA TEXT.. I fly high you barely LAND AT BEST!!" - there was good content in here but it needed to be flipped and rearranged a little bit better to hit harder. I got the ideas though. "You might pop cold but I'm DROPPIN' COLDER.. Talkin artillery? He prolly got smashed by Hussein's statue when it TOPPLED OVER!! Punches steady on lock ready to ROCK YA MOLARS! Tryin to make a quick getaway but I'll STOP YA MOTOR.. Ehem.. sorry I fell asleep hopin your DROP WAS OVER.. saw ya bitch did a little bit more than GOT TA KNOW HER!Please spit somethin' else real talk ORIGINAL SHIT.. I do it every day like a RITUAL BITCH" - these lines were all pretty solid but the closer was kinda weak. The line about the molars was a good imagery punch. This was some close shit. Multis was about a tie, metas and similies were a slight edge to Kill, flow goes to A-OK, wordplay goes to Kill, and punches was a tie. Usually whoever wins punches wins the battle but in this case that category was a tie and therefore I gotta go with the battler who took the majority of the categories. Close shit though and good battle brothers. Respect. Voted: GAtEZAhVElLi-P / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-12 19:11:07

nice battle. reppin dat D! a-ok! Voted: GAtEZAhVElLi-P / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-12 19:48:43

fair one is in. Respect it Voted: GAtEZAhVElLi-P / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-13 11:30:18

Woooh Nice. Toss the Fair back Voted: GAtEZAhVElLi-P / Adverse
Posted on: 2009-07-14 01:20:29