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Posted on: 2009-07-11 11:31:24

fv.. Voted: ShowStoppa / NawkYaOut
Posted on: 2009-07-11 12:22:00

Mehhh Voted: ShowStoppa / NawkYaOut
Posted on: 2009-07-14 20:26:34

whos the winner SHOW STOPPA AHMEN! Fair one on its way. ShowStoppa: "You a bitch you a HOE GOTCHA PRAYIN claimin you hard so GO POP YA BASS MAN My FLOW HARD TA FACE DAMN! You shouldve learned SQUAT YA TAKE THIS SEAT you "a pussy" but it aint take a TWAT TA MAKE HIM QUEEF!!([:)" - first line was just eh, not much happening, but the second line was a pretty decent punch. "graspin dawg" in my hands i GOTCHA FACE N TEETH! someone shouldve TAUGHT YA PACE N BEEF! ya FLAW BE TESTIMENT cuz you WHACK SON PLEASE LISTEN And dont talk cuz THAT GUN "FLEAS BITCHES" like DAWGIE MEDICINE!!" - this was a pretty nice punch as well with a good setup. Rhyme scheme was a little awkward just because there were too many words between similar multis. "imma BURN HIM B look LEARN FROM ME cuz i CHURN THA BEEF youll be SURE TA SCREAM dont EARN YA TEAM the THIRD DEGREE!!!! soon a BIRD TA BE please dont be TALKIN LIKE YA BE HARD cuz ill "TURN YA KNEE" and have ya WALKIN LIKE A RETARD" - pretty nice imagery here. Not bad brother. "GOT CAUGHT WIRE "CHIRPS" nah ah we POP OFF WIRED JERKS So my "FLOW BARKIN" and the only thing this HOE SPARKLIN is KNOCK OFF FIREWORKS!!!" - haha, nice closer. Good shit. NawkYaOut: "Iight Let Me "STOP THE SHOW" Cause Those Weak Barz And "NO FLOW" Is Killing "THE SHOW" Your Beef Is Like A Cold Engine "ITS A NO GO" Am Gonna NAWKYAOUT I Am Still "WAITING FOR YOU TOO SHOW" Any Form Or Presence "OF GREAT FLOW", - mostly just reppin yourself and not really throwing punches in this bar fam. Make sure you string solid concepts together and set up hard hitting punches with a nice variety of multis, metas, similies, and wordplay. "My Barz "ATTACK YA" "WHACK RAP" "INFACT YOU LACK" "RAP TACTICS" All It Takes To Beat You Is "MY CRAZY ANTICS" Thats It "SHOWS OVER" I "GOT THIS" I Won This "NAWKYAOUT TOLD YA" I "BRING FIRE" That Young Cats Like You Can "ONLY INSPIRE" Am A Dream To You Am What "YOU DESIRE" Trynna Say Your "BETTER THAN ME" You "A LIAR" - same thing here with this bar. "Even My "CRITICS AGREE" Fuck Letting "YOU GO FREE" "HOE FREZZE" Get On "BOTH KNEEZ" Suck Swallow And "HOLD DEEZ"(Nuts) "NAWKYAOUT WITH EAZE" I Always Will Be White Like EMINEM "BITCH PLEASE" - again, more of the same. You gotta put together better punches fam. Respect the fair one and hit me up if you need advice. Vote back fair on my hotlister with DizzDaDogg. Voted: ShowStoppa / NawkYaOut
Posted on: 2009-07-14 22:52:49