Lou-Good job on the opener, nice rhyme scheme, good punchline and a tight flo....Didn't like the concept at first but your punched made me like it :D lol...Middle was ehh with punches, stayed good with the flow and consistancy with staying with the flow...good concepts, but you need better consistansy with punches, and a better rhyme scheme...Lou, Your Closer was Weak at first but then I didn't expect the Hardcore Sex part...Low 9 Chainz...As soon as i read your opener, Your flow was fucked...it did get back on track..but it took a while, The opening punch was weak...The middle of your verse was Strong...Good Rhyme Scheme...Nice multies the punch was fucking funny shit...and the flow was nice by then...Your Closer was hot duke...You did good on that shit, the wordplay didn't really make sense at first but it did eventua;;y...mid 9.......Chainz got this on the fair...No hate MFL but HE came better at the middle and end...fv vb on my battle with Dizz Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-02 12:14:23

...BREAKING OVER RATED RECORDS DAILY... Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 12:42:44

WHoooaaa....dis is a close battle like hyphenz stated.....here's my breakdown...Lou i liked how you came out with tha nameplay but like chainz said some of those lines have been used before but you just put them in different context. Tha nameplay was a "lil" over done but tha multi's and flow and good not ur best but it was nice...your build-ups to tha punches were nice too but felt some quite did't hit as hard as they should....NOW!!!!... ._chainz_ i liked ya flow cause you attacked his scripts directly and that's something alot of people try to do but don't quite capitalize on it now that "mf fail/mfl" wordplay was a lil basic for your status but its was okay ya multi's was on point and ya punches some hit harder than others.....CLOSE RACE....i'ma keep dis private cause i don't want any swaying....HIGH 9 TO HIGH 9....FAIR ALWAYZ DROPPED.....no h8 promoted here Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-02 16:33:07

Damn...MFL came hard as fuck, thought his multis were on point and some nice punches scattered within. Some good stuff duke. Chainz was flowin smooth then i read: hand you an L' cause I don't "O U SHIT!"....DOPE. some nice punches like lou's. Vote is in, Consistency and magnitude of punches. Fair is in, Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-02 20:11:53

Dammit!! keep voting this should be a definite hot list!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 20:13:32

This could be one of the hottest battles of the year easily. We need more votes like you said, Lou. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 20:15:41

its 5 votes to be able to on the hot list right?? Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 20:21:24

Yes sir. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 20:27:02

k MFL, your opener was okay. i get your wordplay at the end.. but it doesnt relate to anything . like. only time he felt "Reign is through".. you didnt specify whos rain it is or anything? so when you really think about it.. the punch doesnt make too much sense. But i wont hold that agaisnt you because i get where you were going with your concept. But in the future make sure you word it properly. your second punch was weak too man. your gunna "annihilate his wrists"? come on man. ive seen you be a lot more creative then this!.. your third line was alot like your second, it lacked a really solid punch once again. But on the other hand.. you really picked it up in your fourth line. you had a nice solid punch that hit hard. overalll your verse had some consistant multies, decent flow, and some slacked punches.. but also one good one. gunna give you an 8. Chainz your opener was a good flip seeing how it was partially true lol. an actual personal is always a good thing in a battle. i get your nameplay in the second line but its doesnt make sense 100% either. i can how your spelling his name out. but thats really all your doing. its not a punch really. and you cant put "crunk in a pencil" being crunk is a feeling, not something physical.. but like Lou, ill wont hold it agaisnt you because i get what your trying to see. your Mfl wordplay was ogg too, it didnt sound the same. but i liked the concept nonetheless. you finished strong like Lou did. Overall this was a good battle, what im noticing from both of you is that you need to concentrate on wording your punches better. you have the ideas but they don't come out as hard as they can because of the way you word them. im giving 8's. Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-03 09:13:40

Chainz opener was a funny ass line...Jason basically summed it up...I may or may not have voted in the way he did tho...hmmmm...Close battle...Tossed my fair piece...Respect it... Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-03 19:14:03

thank you for the votes!! now its hot list where it should be! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-03 20:08:54

AYYY...AYY..ey. don't gosta say . yOU';LL NEVER FIND OUT!! ehh ay. Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-03 20:18:11

NICE BATTLE AND NICE PUNCHEZ Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-04 04:37:25

oh fuck...BORD all day..but damn..that was a SIK rebutal..props to BOTH..peace yall.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-04 07:53:07

close but i was feelin ones punches more it was pretty easy nut like jason said the punches really need to be worded right and lou i understand ya opener u were sayin when da rain get thru or his reign is ova he gettin rusty cuz he chains but u didnt make it obvious in ya set up cuz u didint really put it together right... and chains i understood ya owe u punch but it wasnt wordd right either... but pretty decent from both ima drop 8's on both fair is in Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-04 10:00:22

Both were hot. Came with good rhymes and true flow. Good shit to both. But my dude MothaFuckinLou came a little harder. But nice shit to both. Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-04 11:44:42

MFL, your verse was pretty good overall. Ya opener was just ..murder. I noticed in the rest of ya rhymes the syllables were all fucked up..TRY TO MAKE FISTS/ANNIHILATING WRISTS...then SLUMP YA VIEWS PRICK/ENOUGH OF DA LOSE SHIT..etc. And those were alright jabs..While _Chainz_ opener didnt raise my eyebrow, he was comin hard in the middle of his verse..then i'll 'hand you an L' cause I don't "O U SHIT!"..that one did it for me...The crunk line was a lil funny jab. And the last line..Idk if he was referring to Skip To My Lou, the basketball player..but im sure that was it, so a little reference to an icon is plus points. Votes in. Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-04 13:15:01

yall was tyt! somebody battle me :D i wanna rip sum shit up n get ppls opinions Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-04 21:34:06

crazy battle here; both came hard..... i deff liked the "i dont o u shit" chainz dropped ...it hit hard....... id say that edged it for me. no h8 this could go either way..puffpuff pass ///10z Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-04 23:44:30

one had better structure Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-05 06:40:53

That O U Shit Line HAHA Voted: MothaFuckinLou / Wraxius
Posted on: 2009-07-05 12:11:57