I didn't feel like sniping a noob, posted an open. Don't waste it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-30 01:26:04

ill take it but im mad rusty havent been on in ages Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-30 02:21:56

Nice shit dat nigga Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-30 03:18:46

Getting deleted Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-30 03:20:33

BETTER FLOW, BETTER PUNCHES. FV NO HATE Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-06-30 04:00:24

EJT. i see what ur getting at with the lyrics and punches... but u need to fix ur structure to make it sound like a rap even more, and flow like a rap u know? i mean u got the concepts down.. but if u read it.. it sounds like ur saying it but not realy rapping it... so create a rap rhyming scheme, add more multies, and then hit em with a punchline. liike every line gets a punch... but u have liike 2 punches in like 1 line in this battle. cuz this is what u do.. u qoate something then try to make a meta from it... but u need to quoate various of similar concepts then hit em when a WOAHISH punchline... sorta like a meta? what i do is think of simliar stuff, gather those similar concepts down, build a punchline for it, and fill some multies to make it flow, and add some swagger to it. but anywho ur concepts were pretty good... u just need it to make it hard hitting, and more of a punchline. u got some good shiit inur verse so ima give u a 8 since u had more of a complex verse. i seen better tho....Dat nigga gunna ur verse was nothing complex... saw some pretty played stuff, but i guess dats ur style..., i like ur multies and flow but it was sorta random... altho i saw some harder hitting punches from u. one just hit harder. 8-8 vote concealed. Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-06-30 12:00:57

and just pm Mayneak to get dat bull shiit 4 vote deleted peace bro. Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-06-30 12:02:32

wow...respect both verses..here's the expo: EJT, it seemed like you were forcing some of your punches/metas. The first half, you were actually od'ing on em to me. Maybe less and more thought out ones would have been more effective. Overall though the structure was cool and the flow was definately there. Dat...you had a broken multi in the 1st line..otherwise some tuff shit...i felt the modem punch and the braille punch were the strongest. i also think the taco flip worked well and to me made tha difference in a close one..f..vb Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-01 12:32:57

both hot but i really liked Ejt lines. This shit was even all the way through but more complex shit of Ejt was a deciding factor. Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-01 12:42:40

EJT had some pretty dope punchlines but nothing to special.enjoyed reading his verse tho very interesting.also nice multis to bond with the ending punches. Gunna came in with about the same amount of gunplay but barly any punchlines. and the punches he had in hear i already heard like that taco line. but overall its a pretty solid drop from both. FV is concealed to prevent vote swaying. Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-01 15:18:29

wow EJT that was hot i got to say loved the sun applaud/heat clappin line creative and nice but ur structure was a lil off and some stuff was a lil bit forced missy hit it on the head when she said "make it sound like a rap even more"....both had hot verses but dat nigga gunna had some play'd lines that brail in ya chest line ive herd before and he finished off not so great but u did flip a few off EJT lines like the taco lines so imma give you both 9s and give the battle to EJT do to i liked his style n he was more consistent with punches FV VB NO h8 1 Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-01 15:56:04

gb Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-01 16:37:29

wack battle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-01 17:52:20

EJT- First Line Was Dope, Creative Too, I Liked How You Started Your Verse, 2nd Line Was On Point Too I Liked That Heat Clapin Punch And The Tie/Thai & Wrappin/Rappin' Wordplay That Was Crazy, 3rd Line Was A Little Bit Racist But Only If You Take It That Way I Liked How You Used The Idea For Both Parts Of It And How You Structed The Line, 4th Line, Nice Again 5th Line Was Good I Liked How You Ended Your Verse. Overall Good Verse I Felt You Could Of Concintrated More On The Flow Rather Then The Content Of It But I Guess You Need That On A Text Battle Even If You Are Rapping. DatNiggaGu nna- First I Liked The Flow At The Start Of Your Verse, It's Kinda Gutta But It's Cool, First Line It Was Okay Kinda Basic Idea But Alright, 2nd Line Off For Me I Liked The Idea Of Fall In Da Tub But Then The Cream? I Didn't Get What You Were Refering Too, 3rd Line I Didn't Like The Opener But You Finished It Okay, 4th Line Was Pretty Good Liked The Flow Of It But That Taco Line's Getting Old, I've Heard It Way Too Many Times, 5th Line Modem Line Was Decent Didn't Like How You Finished It Though Stalker? Overall Decent At Best Verse, I Feel You Should Work On Flow, Structure And Throwing In Some Multies If You Can And You'll Be Good. Overall Good Batttle To Both, Vote Fair With Unbiased Judgement. -TheStudent Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-01 21:57:14

EJT was okay, but nothin special there....Gunna was okay as well, I felt had a better overall flow and originality. Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-02 00:07:58

Fair Voters Club: EJT you had many punches and came on strong put from the "Thai" line you kinda fell!! the taco line is played as fucked and everything else was just lil jabs no real punches!!! It was all just a punch of 5 or 6 word similies to the guy, it would have been better if you took one of thosse punches, set it up to build to a hard hit!!! multi's were basic but you flowed well!! Your best line was the 'break a sweat' line!!!....DatNiggaG unna - had nice multi's good flow, and a few stand out lines to me!! His opener wasn't as good as EJT's tho!! but the 'Salt in the slugs' line and 'modem on ya arm' line was nice!! Also the 'braille in ya chest' was pretty funny i havent heard that yet! he tried to flip the taco line EJT sent but again thats a played line and he failed to flip it!! EJT was more consistant with the punch attemps, but Datniggagunna was more consistant with the OHh factor punches!!... 8-9..My Piece MFL Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-02 10:27:07

to me ejt took it but 1 part stood out the most for me in gunnas verse"blind ppl wudnt feel u wit da BRAILLE IN YA CHEST!!" haha gud but be this way threwought Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-02 17:45:17

oh my....ejt brought it Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-02 18:11:43

good battle :P Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 19:22:27

wow haha Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 23:18:18

EJT CUZ THE PUNCHES AND THE FLOW WAS ON POINT. DAT YOUR FLOW WAS OFF. Voted: EJT / DatNiggaGunna
Posted on: 2009-07-02 23:39:13