vote fair compare fair so everything will be fair thnx Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-29 15:18:20

I tried a new style here, kinda not feelin it but i think it is somewhat more effective. Leave feedback Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-29 15:24:28

i was gonna get this..damn, lol, but good shit both.. Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-06-29 15:25:24

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Posted on: 2009-06-29 15:28:06

damn shi hot nikkaz b burnin b up out here yo close battle but ejt took it fo shizz no hate holla vb ~Real talk~ Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-06-29 15:31:31

nice shit ejt be fair people Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-29 15:57:11

D to the N to the A is same DNA no ? may i enter in your crew? Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-06-29 16:00:26

fair life yazan jibrin is a winner ejt nice but i liked yazans better Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-06-29 18:19:31

Yo EJT your actually getting great at this really fast. the opener was really hot. Your using the quotes perfectly and relating them to some really nice concepts. so your first line, i thought it was dope up to the cocky. i get the ring / rocky reference but your lacking a punch there, you see what i mean? you have a concept which is great, but you need to link it to a hard hitting punch at the end. same with the ockie part right after it. the shift 8 line was really clever, once again the connection was really good / lovin that concept. fat ass line was alright, not much of a reaction out of me there. to basic and straightforward, you know? the belt at ya waist line was really nice, because you had a solid big concept which is harder to do. the melt at your face line was alright, i get the kisses concept and everything but it wasnt doing much for me. after that you didnt have many lines that jumped out at me too much. the first half of your battle was better.. so focus on making your entire verse like that and you'll be straight! 6-8 Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-06-29 21:30:56

fv vb noh8,, nd not everybody copy or bites/// vbvbvbvbvb Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-01 14:21:06

YAZAN JIBRIN: never ever introduce ur self in a text battle rap saying ur real name...and saying profile gang?..rather than talkn about urself rap and attack the person ur going up against. but anyway some of ur stuff didnt rhyme, hard to follow try use Lb's usual structure. use some lyrical rap elements, and harder punches... ur shiit was like a speech dat rhymed, u need more of a rap. EJT: it looks like ur usual style and set up. i like the concepts and metas and similies dat u approached. i like the cocky line and the kisses lines the most. just remember what i told u on the battle u got with datniggagunna. such as more multies but ur punches and concepts were pretty str8 in this battle... 8-4 Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-01 19:14:35

Respect The Vote 'Fair Tossed' Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-01 19:32:53

Doesn't really need much of a breakdown. EJT got all the categories imo. fv no h8 (giving you a good rating despite this being half assed XD you didn't need much to take it hahaa) Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-01 19:35:52

^^ Yeah i know but i wanted feedback on my verse's structure/content from mainly Jason and Missy. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-01 19:41:12

yazan jibrin- Overall You Were Pretty Basic. You Just Really Need To Work On Getting Your Ideas Straight To A Verse With Some Punches, Multies, Better Vocabulary, Structured Rhymes, Double Rhymes If You Need To, And Just Work On Your Battling, You'll Get Better Overtime I'm Sure We All Wern't At The Level We Are Now. EJT- I Felt Like You Could Of Battled Someone Better With That Kind Of Verse I Mean Snipping Noobs? Even With A New Style? You're In DNA Act Like It But No Hate Though. 1st Line Was Pretty Good, Blade To Ice Like In Hockey, I Liked How You Kept The Flow But Switched Subject Cocky/Rocky, 2 Line Wouldn't It Be Shift-Four? But The Second Part Was Okay, 3rd Line Was Cool But MJ Lines Are Played Out Now For Obvious Reasons,4th Line Was Good For A Hardcore Line, 5th Line Was Dope And Creative, Finished Was Okay But I Felt You Could Of Done Better I'll Give You That You Were Trying Out A New Style Though. Overall Okay Battle, No Hate To Either, Voted Fair With Unbiased Judgement. -TheStudent Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-01 22:12:18

DAMN E YOU ARE GETTING GOOD!!! Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-02 01:13:51

i hav 2 enter in a crew may i enter in of yours ill improve thanks for ur advices although im 11 years old ill work hard thanks a lot for your advices i know i screwed up in this battle the problem is i dont giv punches i make like stories and speeches wit rhymes ur right thanks for all advices but check out mu utha battles ok and ill vote back thanks alot hommies Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 06:21:39

good battle ejt i liked ya shit take it on take care aimin Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-02 06:24:43

Fair Voters Club: Yazan Jubrin - Yazan fix your structure, also your verse sounds like it should be on a mic, text is a little different or alot!! You had some nice concepts but you weren't seting them up!! and many lines were filler and/or some self glorification...flow was kinda sketchy to me too!!... EJT - had ok flow, multi's ehh< but you werent tryna that here!!! i like ya new style, the 'lift weight' line was nice, and the 'melt at ya face' line was pretty decent too!! ya closer was kinda ehh here! but your had some nice lines, concepts were good in this, that plastic thriller i feel coulda been a really good line, but i dont think it was set up as well!! overall 6-8...My piece MFL Voted: i was 11 / EJT
Posted on: 2009-07-02 10:35:32