Hood Surgeon vs lukegreeno - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Length: 8 Lines

Hood Surgeon (74%) WINNER

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Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: *.:True Lyrical Examplez:.*

Reppin: Compton, California, United States

lukegreeno (26%)

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Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: 187 outlaws

Reppin: Saint Peter Port, Guernsey, Guernsey

Hood Surgeon

(ok) i RIP YA EYES FROM YA HEAD!!, Causin "Major Blood Shed" So Ya Can SEE YOURSELF DEAD..!! Let Tha "Glock" REPLACE THEM WIT LEAD..!!// Nigga i PATIENTLY WAITING!!.. LB Got a MESSAGE STATING..!! 
Only "Fuck Wit Me" if Ya Want To COMMIT SUICIDE TO YA RATINGS..!! Kidd I coz U "Suffering" I Break Ya arm Make U Have To Use Ya BAD HAND..For MASTURBATING..!!// Fuck I Make Sure My MESSAGE HIT HOME!! i CRACK YA DOME..!! Make It "Structurly fall apart" Like COLOSSEUMS IN ROME...!! Bitch U FUCKIN WIT THA BIG BOYS!! I'll Have Ya "Hoe Noised" Coz I Can Give Her More "Pleasure" Than a SELECTION OF SEX TOYS...!! Dude Dissin Me COMES AT A COST..!! "Pay Up" or Get Ya HEAD TOSSED!! 
Have Ya BODY Runnin Around In A "Frenzy" Sayin HOW DID I GET LOST..?? !!!..EZ Majestic G

lukegreeno

you'll rip my eyes from my head?// to late budi ure alredi dead// i'll pell you like a snkae redi to shed// why dont you tell everyone ure interbred// all because ure dad ans sister went to bed// no point in runnin boy, uve alredi got an infared, ment for your head// to leave you on the floor dead// then take you to old farmer ted// pay him a tenner to take care of you instead// yer u aint even ed this but uve alredi fled// mate jus give up becus ure ryhmes are as stale as jew bread// and this is a race and im alredi ahead// im in first place// im winnin this race// ure in teh dust of my speedin pace// so dont try n beef or smashed up will be your face// your a fukin disgrace//ven your mum said u were a fukin waste of space

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Battle started: June 29^th 2008 at 13:04
Challenger joined: June 29^th 2008 at 14:03

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2008-06-29 14:03:45).

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lukegreeno <outlaws> Basic Member	thats tight man, fukin swish Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-29 13:51:40
lukegreeno <outlaws> Basic Member	i got this one i'll try n battle bak lol Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-29 13:55:33
Bently_Coupe <Acon> Basic Member	good luck lol Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-29 13:56:51
lukegreeno <outlaws> Basic Member	imma need it :P Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-29 14:06:04
Money Millz <KCK>	vb hot shit Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 14:21:14
Manny Festo	fair as fuck.........return one Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 14:23:41
ItzNDaSawce	nice shit yo..vb Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 14:26:19
slim-craigy Basic Member	shit up greeno blow him outta da water man Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 15:10:45
Hood Surgeon <TLEx> Basic Member	^^Lmfao send 8 u lil hatin ass bitch !! Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-29 15:13:54
KingofSparta Basic Member	Not bad. Luke: you started out like you were gonna be flippin some shit back on him, which is good, but you didn't really fully develop your punches into something that was hard hitting and damaging bro. Make sure that you use quality metaphors, similies, and wordplay to setup solid punches. You also should try incorporating some multis into your bars to give your rhyme scheme some added complexity and enhance your flow. Flow was still solid though because you kept your bars short and used a lot of internals, but work with some multis too bro. Maj: you're definitely moving in the right direction homie. I thought that Colosseum's in Rome punch was clever and humorous and you had a couple other good ones as well. Just keep building off of material like this but be sure that you stay consistent with it from start to finish. Only other thing as constructive criticism is that you put CAPS on a lot of words that aren't actually multis. You can do whatever you want with your structure and format, but most cats just use the caps for multis or to illustrate wordplay. Pretty solid though. Vote back fair brothers. Stay up. 1 ~LD Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 16:21:40
6laze Basic Member	faggot Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 17:12:43
lukegreeno <outlaws> Basic Member	cheers sparts for the good tips and that man much respect !! Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-29 17:22:40
LapseOfMind Basic Member	fv Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 17:27:44
D Day Basic Member	I GOT KICKED OUTTA THE CREW BY 1 OF THE LEADERS NOT THE MAIN ONE BUT IMA STILL STAYEN FRIENDS WIT ALL. PCE Voted: Hood Surgeon / lukegreeno Posted on: 2008-06-29 19:57:54


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