nice flow fv......vb fairly no h8 Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 12:38:37

I'd like to see both of you guys step it up a bit in terms of your concepts. Boneless had some pretty simple rhymes and the verse was a bit bland. you did have a nice flow but it seemed to lack something. you could use a bit more imagery, metas, wordplay, and multis. all in all, not a bad verse, just needs some more work. K O S your verse had a lot of played concepts like better crocker, fly straight, and average gun play. your flow was on point too so i enjoyed that. you guys have the basics down...not explore more and try some more complex mutlis and concepts. that is something I am still working on too...so it's easier said than done. check out my open battles and throw down some fair ones. peace. B Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 12:38:55

K O S got it ...fv..vb Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 12:49:49

CO-SIGN B-SIDE Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 12:51:31

fv... Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 13:01:37

oooooooo i'm sorry sirji..... Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 13:22:34

NICE I HONESTLY THINK KOS SHOULD OF FILLED THAT LAST LINE THOUGH Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 15:06:57

k.o.s. vote on my battle Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-27 20:00:04

K O S you've come much harder than this bro. Quit your slackin! lol Alright on the real though lets get down to business. Boneless: you had some good concepts in there fam and the hearing aids line got a chuckle, but you need to string together punches with quality setups using metas, wordplay, and similies. You should also incorporate some multis and internals into your verse to make for a more complex rhyme scheme and help drive the flow. Other than that, not too bad man...you had some creative concepts to work with, now you just need to work on developing them a little bit better because punches rule the battlefields. KOS: I already threw my 2 cents into the bucket about this particular verse not being up to par with some of your others. You had some good concepts, but it just seems like you weren't really bringin it the way you brought it in our battle. That verse was more complete from top to bottom in terms of having all the elements of a solid battle verse. Still, I'm feeling yours a little bit more here and you take home the win. Vote back fair on my battle with Ill Nexus. Should be a hotlister. 1 ~LD Voted: KapitalMC / K O S
Posted on: 2008-06-28 01:19:04