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jack the ripper (25%)
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Reppin: Newark, New Jersey, United States
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Reppin: United States



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Battle started: June 27th 2008 at 11:56
Challenger joined: June 27th 2008 at 12:29


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2008-06-27 12:29:56).

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GrEaT BaMbInO
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fv......vb fairly no h8 Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-27 12:43:18 Private Message GrEaT BaMbInO

jack the ripper
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not bad b side for a nigga freash on and you been up here but not bad Comment Only
Posted on: 2008-06-27 12:54:21 Private Message jack the ripper

u_already_know
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good battle Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-27 15:08:30 Private Message u_already_know

KingofSparta
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Jack: you've got some swaggerjackin going on in your verse but you're spending too much time rappin about yourself homie and not focusing your punches on taking direct hits at your opponent. Punches rule the battlefields and you need to be utilizing quality metaphors, similies, and wordplay to make them more clever, witty, humorous, and hard-hitting. Rhyme scheme is a little simple as well, even though it flowed real nice. You might want to add some more multis and internals to your verse as well to help increase the complexity of it and drive the flow. Just take my criticism constructively bro and use it to elevate. B: not quite as thorough and complex as some of your other more recent ones that I read in terms of overall consistency, but you still did more than enough to win this one. You had some nice punches in there, some good brutal imagery which I don't even need to remind you is my kind of shit, and some quality multis to polish it off and put the icing on the cake. Verdict is in on this one. B Side takes it. Vote back fair on my opens brothers. 1 ~LD Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-27 18:30:05 Private Message KingofSparta

crmlbywonder
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good shit Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-27 23:32:46 Private Message crmlbywonder

B SIDE
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a 2????? WTF crmlbywonder smokin???? Comment Only
Posted on: 2008-06-28 09:44:09 Private Message B SIDE

Boutz
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No hate fv Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-29 15:46:18 Private Message Boutz

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Voted. Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-29 18:50:35 Private Message _SLIPES_

andymitchell115
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Jack: most of your lines were talking about how awesome you were and not really going after B Side which really hurt you in this...you had one or two punches but not enough to really put a dent into B Side... B Side: not the best you've written but you consistently came at Jack with punches, and you had the upper hand in imagery as well which always helps in battle verses..IMO B Side takes this with the better punches Voted: jack the ripper / B SIDE
Posted on: 2008-06-29 21:19:07 Private Message andymitchell115

 

 
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