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Jock713 (0%)

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Reppin: Houston, Texas, United States

FlawLess Emcee (100%) WINNER

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Reppin: Miami, Florida, United States

Jock713

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say my ryhmes the best when i spit 1 verse i put you 2 rest yo my flow is the shit and you just my bitch i came from htown and now im getting rich you cant see me kid you just wanna be you feel get like me i cock my 45 back and blast back if u got anything 2 say come where me and my niggas stay in the streets of htown where the shit go down and niggas get laid down i write my shit you just copy yo shit you everytime you see me im with my click with my mack10 on the side of my hipe i write my lyrics like niggas be slanging that shit im flyer then a babys bottle when you sleep you slobber....
im realest in the streets i dont act hard i just be me.....

FlawLess Emcee

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i will not hessitate to TAKE YOUR LIFE then SHAKE YOUR WIFE wit my KNIFE/ man got rocks bigga then YO HEAD you talk alot of talk but did anyone else hear what this HOE SAID so advanced my rhymes are SLOW READ/ now you hatin cause im TOO ADVANCE couldnt beat me even if YOU ENHANCE your STANCE cause i got you in a TRANCE/ you couldnt DO ME wit a OZZY or an A-K jus A-GAY/ you in need of a crew? here ill RECRUIT YOU 10 seconds later watch how fast i BOOT YOU then SHOOT YOU put you on MUTE TOO/ you talk alot but your really soft like ICE CREAM make you TWICE SCREAM/ once on EARTH THEN AGAIN IN HELL man what are you WORTH YOULL NEVER SELL/ here let me stick the GAT IN YA MOUT youll step BACK WHEN I SHOUT cause you really SCARED say what you want but no one really CARED/ so please JOCK get off my COCK cause unlike you i TALK wit my GLOCK

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Battle started: June 25^th 2008 at 22:32
Challenger joined: June 25^th 2008 at 22:33

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2008-06-25 22:33:52).

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FlawLess Emcee Basic Member	GB JOCK Comment Only Posted on: 2008-06-25 22:34:13
GrEaT BaMbInO Basic Member	FV....VB FAIRLY NO H8 Voted: Jock713 / FlawLess Emcee Posted on: 2008-06-25 22:35:39
K O S <GSQUAD> Basic Member	jock you need to use some structure ... FAIR VOTE, VOTE BACK, Voted: Jock713 / FlawLess Emcee Posted on: 2008-06-25 22:39:25
MoB GeNeRaL Basic Member	fv vb on ma battle wit lil scar Voted: Jock713 / FlawLess Emcee Posted on: 2008-06-25 22:44:26
KingofSparta Basic Member	Goddy took this one fairly easily. Don't look at that 7 as a hate rate bro. I reserve 10's for 16 and 32 liners so 9 is the highest you could get anyways on an 8 liner. I also have my own way of scoring things as you know from having seen some of my feedback in the past. So let's get down to business: Jock - really not a whole lot going on in your verse man. You rep yourself a little bit and do a little gun talk, but you need to be focusing your punches on your opponent and using quality metaphors, similies, and wordplay to setup better punches. Punches rule the battlefields and they need to be witty, clever, creative, humorous, and hard-hitting. I'm not really seeing that in your verse homie. You'll also want to incorporate some multis and internals to make for a more complex rhyme scheme and help drive the flow of your piece. Don't take any of this as hate, just take it constructively and use it to build and elevate. Goddy: like I said, you took this one but there are still some areas where you can improve too bro. Nobody's perfect until we're perfect. That goes without saying. You had a few nice multis in there and a little bit of internals, but you should try tightening up your bars in terms of overall syllables if you aren't going to be doing more multis and internals because otherwise your flow suffers a little bit. Some good concepts with your punches and a few that were real solid, so just keep building off that and you'll keep elevating bro. Respect to both of you. Fair vote back on my newest opens with K O S and The Prophet. Stay up gods. 1 ~LD Voted: Jock713 / FlawLess Emcee Posted on: 2008-06-25 23:05:43
Perfect Doubt Basic Member	fv VOTE BACK ON MY BATTLE WIT SPLENDID!! Voted: Jock713 / FlawLess Emcee Posted on: 2008-06-27 17:23:12
ItzNDaSawce	goddy hurtin um..vb Voted: Jock713 / FlawLess Emcee Posted on: 2008-06-28 16:23:58


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