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th3boytdogg617 (0%)
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Reppin: Boston, Massachusetts, United States
NotcHy (100%) WINNER
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Reppin: Burrows, Indiana, United States



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Battle started: June 25th 2008 at 20:49
Challenger joined: June 25th 2008 at 21:07


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2008-06-25 21:07:41).

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dlinkwent
<DA TRUTH>
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dat shit waz raw top a lil easy but raw for real Voted: th3boytdogg617 / NotcHy
Posted on: 2008-06-25 21:12:55 Private Message dlinkwent

GrEaT BaMbInO
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writen more give for more punches fv....vb fairly no h8 Voted: th3boytdogg617 / NotcHy
Posted on: 2008-06-25 21:13:15 Private Message GrEaT BaMbInO

ItzNDaSawce

this aint any better..u know wut i am talkin bout..peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2008-06-25 21:27:07 Private Message ItzNDaSawce

Eon The Era
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tha hottness. fv Voted: th3boytdogg617 / NotcHy
Posted on: 2008-06-25 21:43:56 Private Message Eon The Era

K O S
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FV VB on my latest battle some hotlist shit ... Voted: th3boytdogg617 / NotcHy
Posted on: 2008-06-25 22:01:32 Private Message K O S

KingofSparta
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Dogg: your verse was a little too simplistic than to do anything real damaging. Your rhyme scheme was a little questionable as well and there really wasn't a real clear flow that emerged. You should work on incorporating multis and internals into your lines to help increase the complexity of the rhyme scheme and drive the flow. Then you gotta start putting some punches together that are damaging to your opponent. Use metaphors, similies, and wordplay to set up clever, witty, humorous and/or hard-hitting punches. You can also use imagery as well. Don't take this as hate homie, take it constructively and use it to build and elevate. Everybody has to start somewhere. TopNotch: pretty solid verse all the way through bro. You had some real nice multis in there, but a couple of them were a little bit off in terms of actual rhyme precision as well as syllable count. With syllable count especially you gotta be careful that they're all matched up properly or the multis won't flow together well. Most of em were good though - just a few that struggled. Punches- you had some good ones in there and some great concepts in places but it wasn't fully consistent all the way through. "Pop Tops like a bottle of liquor" and "text is never read like nutrition facts" were two that really stood out. Man if you can bring that kind of consistency from start to finish you'd be 9's and 10's all day. Good shit. Throw the fair one back on my two newest battles: vs K O S and vs The Prophet. Good battle brothers. 1 ~LD Voted: th3boytdogg617 / NotcHy
Posted on: 2008-06-25 22:42:20 Private Message KingofSparta

 

 
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