both of you send beef, especially you Flawda Voted: 352flawdaOG / J bones
Posted on: 2008-06-20 05:46:55

fv vb Voted: 352flawdaOG / J bones
Posted on: 2008-06-20 06:00:41

vote my battles fellas....J Bones lets get that battle poppin son, send me 8 Voted: 352flawdaOG / J bones
Posted on: 2008-06-20 07:14:24

1 Voted: 352flawdaOG / J bones
Posted on: 2008-06-21 05:24:05

Alright I'm returning the favor of a fair vote. Don't take this as hate, its just constructive criticism designed to help you both elevate and improve. Having said that, you both have a lot of room to improve. Focus on putting together some harder hitting punches by setting up direct disses at your opponent with metaphors and wordplay. Punches rule the battlefields and you need to be straight up droppin anvils and tank turrets on a mutha fucka from start to finish in a verse. Also, throw in some multis to make for a more complex and enjoyable rhyme scheme. JBones: you take this one though because I did enjoy some of your imagery with cuttin his throat, poppin his head on your antenna, and tossin his body in the trunk. haha If you follow my battles, you'll see that I use a lot of brutal imagery to dismantle my opponents with. On that note, vote back fair on my battles with LightWork and with SpitVomit and I'll keep returning the favor to help you all improve. Keep elevating brothers. 1 ~LD Voted: 352flawdaOG / J bones
Posted on: 2008-06-23 01:50:01