Get at it when you can fam! Comment Only
Posted on: 2008-03-05 10:19:09

good shit bro !! Comment Only
Posted on: 2008-03-05 22:07:29

good good fv Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 05:44:27

Fair Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 14:26:09

no h8 fv vb Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 17:23:53

good shit. guy with better punches got it. Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 18:37:53

Both was nice.Felt one's pucnhes a little more...Voteback Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 19:29:16

*Deucesz Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 21:09:09

wont let me vote wtf Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 21:34:02

real deal for real .. its all good .. Stryda don't like it .. send beef or suck ma cock ahha jp Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 21:57:21

LMAO real rydas on this Stryda .. Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-06 21:59:15

STRYDA J: *Looks at Deal's verses* Pfff ... I could 'make more punches' in a GAME OF SCRABBLE. Styda having these LAMES ALL STRAGGLED? I'll put my "dosh(money)-on-text " and like "Posh-n-Becks I'll have your FAME ALL BABBLED! / ^Mostly just multis here fam. You need to put more emphasis on your punches. Deal you'll be "drowsy-and-hit" cuz I'll have you "lousy-and-shit" like you've been given a FRANTIC POTION. Endless are "soppy-and-stuff?" Deal's mama told me they were "choppy-and-rough" a bit like tha atLANTIC OCEAN! / ^Alright, this was better here but you still need to focus on the quality of your punches. Think of your wordplay, metas, and similies as the JABS that setup the HOOKS and UPPERCUTS (the KO punches) Homie J'z gna FAMISH YOUR FATHER and VANISH YOUR PRADA. SMACK'll be "steadying-the-back" and "readying-attack" something like the SPANISH ARMADA! / ^A little better again. Getting stronger as you move along. Keep swingin with punches nonstop until you’ve pummeled a mutha fucka into the turf. I heard your a multie ... This MAN IS TWO? (accounts) Stryda be "thumping-at-arrival " and deal be "jumping-for-surviva l" like an Australian KANGAROO! / ^Na fam. The Kangaroo punch was cheese. Dogg you COULD BE GAY? Pshh ... Your hoe be saying 'you WOULD BEAT J, if you really love your HOOD' SHE SAY. Man I'll make your "times-all-slayed" and your "rhymes-all-played" like a GOOD CLICHY (ouch!) / ^Good Cliché? I’m sure that’s what you meant, so this punch at least gets you a little bit back on track though. Still nothing real damaging or hard hitting. Supreme all on MENTAL PAROLE. Real Deal'll be "yielding-in-lies" and J'll have you "shielding-your-eyes " like paRENTAL CONTROL! / ^Haha…best punch of your verse. These are the kinds that you need to focus on and build entire verses around. You say you deserve better than your record? All these "slack-lies", but Stryda will give you "black-eyes" like y'all wearing SUNGLASSES. Your reply can "fill-the-nappy" (its shit) and my win will make "children-happy" like when their with FUN CLASSES/FUNK LASSES (girls)! / ^Eh…wordplay was a bit of a stretch here. The Sunglasses punch was alright though, that probably should’ve been the one to end the bar. Stop "ducking-my-ringed-c all" cuz im WALKING NOT PRANCING. I'll have you 'LEAVING TO FOLD AND BLOW'. Cuz only time your re'CEIVING A GOLDEN GLOBE' is when your "sucking-the-kings-b all" and I aint TALKING ABOUT DANCING / ^You forced the last multi in there. “Suckin the kings ball” would’ve been the right place to have ended the bar. Niggers "reporting-that" im getting "deported-back" to when I was LIVING FOSTERS AND WHORES! Your a "supporting-act" a bit like getting GIVEN OSCAR AWARDZ / ^Decent wordplay here and a decent punch. You’ve got some room to elevate. Take that invite to my site and I’ll show you how its done. 1 REAL DEAL: this "RIDERS GAY" yeah im from oz fuk so i say fuck "STRYDER MATE" damn with shit like this you 'know its me' like im 'smoking weed' i stay "LIGHTEN J" ^Not bad here. Decent wordplay and punch. "FIRE SPRAY @ your EYE AIMED" ADMIRE a GREAT" 'toking weed' getting ''HIGHER youlle FADE" "TYPIN INSANE" so "FIGHT youlle get LAYED" like im TYRED n BLAZED" // ^Just filler multis here. No punches. Make sure you bring punches in every bar bro. but 'youlle be' BEATEN TOO A PULP" im 'cool see' your "READING a TRUE ASSAULT" lyrical im EATING WHOSE ON TOP" till i stop "BREATHEN youlle KEEP LOSIN THA LOT" "LEAVING PROOF AHM HOT" im 'rich az chop with dealerz' thissa like a 'richbak cross rotweiler' "COMPETING a POODAL DOG" ^??? A lot of things going on in this bar but nothing really “happening”. Get to a sensible punch quicker bro. ~need i "SAY MORE" ~heat "HATES YALL" ~leave "FACES SORE" yu n ya peeps ~be tha "SAME WHORES" ~we diso"BAY tha LAW" ~beleive we AINT Getting CAUGHT" so ~keep the LAME TALK" to tha ~least o"K DORK" ~ez i PRAY-LORD // ^Filler multis without punches aren’t going to win you too many battles…except on this site. I mean, if you all are happy with that then that’s cool, but if you’d like to learn how to really crush an opponent, come to Universal Emcees. that this ~geaks sees shit my WAY FOR "HIZ SAKE" or this BITCH MADE KIDS FACE 'dissapear this 'fags gone' this 'cats wrong' like a MISTAKE" my 'raps hot' "STRICT ACE" 'grab a mop' n sweep up "HIZ BRAINZ" // ^A lot of multis…no real punches. You need to word your bars better homie. 'supreme flowin' keep goin' like BIG-TRAINS" i see yu with ya shoulders 'hunched up' like yu WEARING A SUIT" ille kill yu with '1 punch' ENDING YA DUDE" no one can ' touch us ' soldiers "PREPARING TA SHOOT" // 'trust fag' its ok i know yu 'just mad' cause yu "STARING YA DOOM" i 'crush macs' they SENDING TA LOSE" // ^Again, you need to use better wordplay, metas, and similies to help you set up more damaging punches. lol , dont get too 'emotional bruz' many cant "COME CLOSE" i 'leap oceanz n stuff' wat the "FUK BRO" yu can 'keep blowing ya pufffsss' but "JUST KNOW" im 'heaps dope enuff'' leave wat yu opened "UP CLOSED" yu 'need growing up' vsin 'me bro iZ dumb' only get yu like a CAST-FROZE" im PAST PROS" 'not broken from love' but ya HEART BROKE 'crooked cunts know us' aBOVE-FOES" u can 'look but dont touch' like "ART-SHOWZ".. eE ^You’ve got a nice flow and I’ll give you *dapz on that fam, but you still need to work on the quality of your punces. The “look but don’t touch” like ART SHOWZ wasn’t bad though. Alright you both can use some work in the punch department, but Stryda J had the best punch in the battle so that's where my vote goes. Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 00:06:53

RV FV ...an SPIT TECHS CAN SUCK MY FUCKN NUTS ^^ THE GAYEST FUCK DICK RIDEN CREW ON THIS SITE ! an dats da Real Deal ...send BEEF IF U DONT LIKE WHUT I GOT TO SAY!! to http://WWW.STR8GHETTO.COM/A T_UR_MOMS HOUSE !! Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 01:18:35

good shyt Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 01:32:18

fuk man i just rap i just wrote this shit .. if yu dont feal it then its wateva .. good battle @ stryda if yu wanna send anotha 1 ille reply n try put a bit more punches into it !!! good shit fam stay up Comment Only
Posted on: 2008-03-07 05:34:25

very close Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 08:33:25

stryda no h8.. fv Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 11:41:21

Good Verses, But Real Your Flow Was A Little Sketchy During The Furst Like 5 lines, A Little Overwhelming With Words..Still Put In Some Good Work Tho..J Came With Some Funny Ass Punches Like That Kangaroo Line..Shit Had Me Laughin...So FV is in For The More Consistent Harder Hittin' Verse! -1- Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 14:20:50

HOT HOT HOT ! GB FV NOH8 ~ Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 16:59:57

nice battle fellaz Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-07 22:40:44

fv Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-08 05:02:00

good battle...really good battle...vb Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-08 07:24:31

both vb Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-08 10:48:17

fv vb Voted: Stryda J / The Real Deal
Posted on: 2008-03-08 16:50:12