my bad fan was blowin in da mic Comment Only
Posted on: 2007-05-22 23:35:41

Nyce Flows Both you came clean Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-22 23:45:59

gv Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-23 00:01:24

some of dubbs stuff didnt make sense but yo dat ima recite a verse he who doesnt not pop will be popped first was hot Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-23 00:02:00

dubb, you need to have a plot in your rhymes, a setup of characters a conflict, a climax and a conflic resolution. In the end, there should me a moral to your rhymes and every word spoken should build and complement the next so that it all makes sense in perfect harmony. Also, i felt that your verse skipped several genres from comedy, to drama to coming of age story, I would like to see more fluidity to your scene changes and better character development. Everything else was really dope though, you win. Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-23 01:42:07

hahhahahahahaha mac - - - thanks for the win . . . nextime i'll plot out my storyline better . .. but keep it a freestyle of course hahah . . Comment Only
Posted on: 2007-05-24 00:31:45

haha, spittin to incantrix, i thought about that b4. dubb. Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-24 08:45:58

but i dont get it, u used to sound english. wtf is up. Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-24 08:47:16

gb guys flows iz tight Voted: Willy Grubz / BkING
Posted on: 2007-05-24 20:31:48