Expo: there is a lot of attempted wordplay here, hopefully it doesnt go over anyone's heads.

AK's

DAMN at first i thought this was gonna be a hard decision but as soon as i read SF's verse i knew

Dessaline you probably shoud've dropped a blind drop u did hella good but u did misspell kanye with "kayne' that got nun to do with my vote just wanted to point out 😂

SF that shit was amazing keep that shit up 

fairs in i wanna see a rematch but this time with a blind drop posted

Dead: the drive bars were straight but kind of long winded. If build up that much on a concept the punch needs to be flames. And why is it a high payment for the trip? Are bullets sending him flying? Or you robbing him for pay? Maybe angle it like you got payed to kill him. It's not connecting. I get the bar but it's about execution. Ya gotta think more about what you're saying and if it will hit hard and makes someone say "damn what a dope flip". And you gun "backs up power"? Would you really say something like that out loud. Here's what I want you to do, when you write a punch... erase the punchline and say the setup out loud by itself? Does it sound natural? If not there you go. Ya got solid ideas just work on how you word your bars fam. Good shit

SF: check syllable counts. HATES-YOU-DUDE/HATER TO YOU. Watch inner rhymes within your multis PLAYIN/MACHE is a haaaard slant rhyme to even say out loud. You missed some opportunities for punchlines bro. You know how he said he's got "phony paper"? Why not spend that as a line how... he "Wouldn't have the paper to cover it all" making PIÑATA DONKEYS!! lol that line ain't much but it's a punchline. A clever flip. You might have been going for something like that but you didn't exactly make it clear. You need to start doing that, it's what separates guys here. Hate to say it but your opponent had solid ideas and flips (albeit with issues of their own but still their).

im giving this one to Dess solely on cleverness. Good battle guys, fairs in

need a mod to switch GREIFS vote. he voted for the other guy but put me.

Des had some nice lines at the end. Decent multies. But the first 70% was filler. Sf started out great. Then fell off. It's a tough decision. I feel like sf stayed on point and flowed well. His multis were ok. The end really fell of for sf. And des started out weak. Des didn't diss his opponent nearly enough. Vote sf 

Hot ass battle here no doubting that, Dess been on his Dean as of late he's been bodying dudes and coming up with big punches like the ones that one this battle