Chainz: good start. For now you should work on your rhymes (saying/ African baby? You/hour?) stuff like that. Then bump up those syllable counts. Go for bigger rhymes. Try 2-4. Then once you get that down work on punchlines, wordplay, and metaphors.

ida: you had pretty clean and more complex rhyme patterns here. Other than that I'd give the same advice about punches, etc. nothing wowed me... but clean.

good battle here, ida takes it for a overall slicker drop. Fv giving good rates

12 you started off better than your usual but quickly faded back into rhyming stuff like

Rap, tap, crap, yap... dr suess shit. Try to use more words "MAD HATTER" "BAD HACKER,

"LAST LAUGH" "SLASH HALF" etc...then get more complex when u master that.

Idhau, not bad, but I have seen better from you.

Can we just get a mod to ban lil Mozart from commenting...or just banned..? Shits annoying as fuck.

Damn nice little battle here! Winner here goes to all the multies that just went together smoothly! Nothing seemed forced! Good read!

Respect

Diff chains didn't diss his opponent at all. The African baby line was word play nice attempt but it didn't work as a punch. idhau hit hard with multiple punches. Nose dive line was dope. I can see ur style u def listened to jr writer. He's old tho. Not very relevant. Great ending. Exclusion was good. Flow on point. Great verse. 12 I'd work on dissing the opponent. Don't just submit the first thing that comes to ur head. 

solid drops. idhau had some nice lines, and good solid flo. 12 came a little harder, so win to him.

voted.

My winner had the hands and the wordplay to not only bury his opponent, but to bury him then rebury him with the punches here yO

I personally don't like "filler" lines, the ones that are there just to keep the rhyme scheme going on; as 12diff did with Kyle-mile. Also, the rhymes are pretty simple and mostly monosyllabic. idahau painted a very clear picture of what he was trying to say, used multi-sillable rhymes